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This is a poetic journey that follows the life of a spirited individual who challenges the constraints of everyday life. With lots of imagery and playful language, I introduce you to a protagonist who revels in defying norms and embracing the unconventional. From mismatched socks to defying classroom rules, the poem sets up a rebellious soul seeking wisdom and excitement in the midst of mundane routines.

Finding magic in the everyday moments and ultimately discovering the truest form of defiance within oneself.

Could this have all possibly been me, who I once was….Maybe??

 

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With hair ablaze, a jester unconfined, I scoffed at the mundane, its life declined. My wardrobe, a riot, a rhapsody bold, Mismatched socks my standard, stories untold. In classrooms of tedium, rules I'd defy, Grasping forbidden knowledge, 'neath watchful sky. Craving for wisdom in esoteric wells, Chased squirrels with saws, casting fanciful spells! Detentions for antics, the school's icy stare, Derided in classrooms, a spirit too rare. Math teacher's scorn, a job painting lines foretold, I retorted, "How much does it pay?" - detention took hold. Mom asked me why I never brought my girls home, I chuckled and said, "They're not the type to be shown." The wild ones, the rebels, the ones full of flame, Not the kind for a dinner, not the ones with a name. Misfits my comrades, a menagerie strange, United in chaos, defying the change. Years danced in a blur, a pantomime bright, But a disquieting word, a sense of not quite right. A whirlwind of antics, a panoply grand, Impromptu escapes, career-shifting sands. Near-death encounters with fauna, a squirrel, perhaps, But the thrill, oh the thrill, fueled my madcap laps! The thrill of the unexpected, a fading strain, A gnawing suspicion, a predictable bane. The mask I had crafted, of rebellion's grand guise, Cracked and revealed, the truth in my eyes. The jester unmasked, a lesson I gained, That the extraordinary, in the ordinary, can be plain. No longer I chase, the fantastical dream, But accept the real, where beauty can stream. For the truest defiance, lies not in the fight, But accepting oneself, in the ordinary light. So here I stand, flaws and all, unashamed, The laughter remains, though the fantasy's tamed. With lessons in tow, I'll mend and I'll mend, Explore the mundane, and find joy till the end. For the greatest adventure, in life's simple quest, Is finding the magic, within one's own breast.

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Date: 3/10/2024 1:52:00 PM
Ah dear daniel, looks like i didnt read this before, firstly congratulations on potd, and what a deep write this is, i know so many that seek for excitement, to stand out amidst the mundane, the norm, that may seem boring, growing up, i was a goth, a rebel, in highschool, always felt like an outcast, but i understood where it all came from, i never felt like i belonged anywhere. Anyhow, this poem is a deep introspective one too? And so many lines stood out for me especially how youve woven
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Daniel Henry Rodgers
Date: 3/12/2024 5:52:00 AM
Dearest Empress, Your thoughtful reflections on my poem have touched my heart deeply. Thank you for taking the time to read and appreciate my work. Your words of congratulations on being chosen as Poem of the Day mean the world to me. It's fascinating to hear about your own experiences growing up as a goth and feeling like an outcast. Your empathy shines through in your understanding of seeking excitement amidst the mundane. I'm glad you found depth in my introspective piece, especially the lines about accepting oneself in an ordinary light. Your suggestion of framing those words is truly humbling. The mention of my inability to introduce girls to my mother was a lighthearted touch, and I'm glad it made you smile.
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Date: 3/12/2024 5:52:00 AM
As for music, it's been a mix of genres, reflecting different moods and phases of my life. From Folk Rock Joni Baez, Joni Mitchell, Don McLean, James Taylor, Bob Dylan to hard rock Led Zepplin, Black Sabbath, Uriah Heap, to Doors, Grand Funk, 3 Dog Night to name a few. How about you? Empress, thank you again for your kind, deep, and introspective words and for sharing your thoughts. - Blessings, my dear friend. - Daniel
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Date: 3/10/2024 1:54:00 PM
The ending hits home “ For the truest defiance, lies not in the fight, But accepting oneself, in the ordinary light. So here I stand, flaws and all, unashamed,” these are wise words that needs to be framed and hung on ones walls, so powerful! And flawless how youv delivered. Also made me smile the lines about not being able to introduce girls to your mother. Hah. Clever one! Pleasure reading your work, its always something new, and deeply meaningful from your artistic quill, i wonder, what music did you listen to growing up? Enjoyed reading this
Date: 3/8/2024 9:55:00 PM
Dear Daniel, I love your introspective poem, with its beautiful lessons. A magnificent creation! It's a fave for me. Blessings.
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Date: 3/9/2024 4:29:00 PM
Dear, Evelyn, thank you for your wonderful note and most kind words. It fills my heart. blessings, Daniel
Date: 3/4/2024 7:08:00 PM
You grew up! Another great poem, Daniel. Blessings, Shirley
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Date: 3/9/2024 4:30:00 PM
Dear Shirley, I a so grateful that you stooped by and read my poem. I am very appreciative. Yes, I did grow up. Blessings, my friend, Daniel
Date: 3/3/2024 12:04:00 PM
Lucky are those who succeed in "finding the magic within one's own breast"! How I reveled in reading your enlightening poetry line by line! What a beauty! Each stanza is a phase of a never ending journey .. lessons to learn .. acceptance of failure as a gain.. attaining the limits of the Self .. keeping the bond between the fantasy and the mundane.. I highly appreciate and value the precious Light that lies in you and between the layers of your poetry! You soar high and you dig deep! An honour and a blessing to read you, Daniel.. Best regards.
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Date: 3/3/2024 4:17:00 PM
Dear Besma, To know that my words have touched you on such a profound level fills me with gratitude and humility. Your reflections on the poem’s themes illuminate the nuances of the human experience in a way that is both insightful and deeply touching. Your appreciation for the beauty woven into each stanza reflects a keen awareness of the complexities inherent in our quest for self-discovery. Thank you, Besma, for your unwavering support and encouragement. Your presence in this journey of self-expression is truly an honor and a blessing. May we continue to soar high and dig deep, uncovering the magic that lies within and between the lines of our shared experiences. With warmest regards and deepest appreciation, Daniel
Date: 3/1/2024 10:52:00 PM
Dear Daniel, thank you for sharing the reflection of your life in this delightfully humorous, and excellent rhyme. I guess most of us can identify with being rebellious. You found the secret, the key as you point out is Self-Acceptance, a lesson to all, which is aptly projected in the last line of your poem - ‘For the greatest adventure, in life's simple quest, Is finding the magic, within one's own breast’. While I don’t profess to overshadow work, On my page there is a video called ‘Shadowland’, that you may like, a rebellious theme with a twist – and deep lesson - Hugs Maria
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Date: 3/2/2024 11:18:00 AM
Dear Maria, your gracious words truly warm my heart! Thank you for immersing yourself in the playful rhythm of my reflections. Your insight resonates deeply; indeed, self-acceptance is the compass guiding us through life's rebellious tides. I eagerly await the journey within 'Shadowland', where rebellion meets wisdom. Your invitation is a treasure, a testament to the serendipitous connections poetry creates. Blessings, Daniel
Date: 2/29/2024 10:05:00 PM
From a rebellious boy who defied every accepted norm and roamed around like a whirlwind with misfits as comrades and who got derided in classrooms, you grew into a sedate person Time taught you that yours was not the right lifestyle..."Years danced in a blur, a pantomime bright, But a disquieting word, a sense of not quite right." Soon the mask, you have been wearing, you tore away and presented yourself as you were with all your flaws. You learned the valuable lesson- "the truest defiance, lies not in the fight, But accepting oneself, in the ordinary light." Now you are a happy person. This journey of growth into a mature personality is so inspiring dear Daniel.
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Date: 3/1/2024 4:28:00 AM
Dear Valsa, your heartfelt reflection on my journey from rebellion to self-acceptance deeply moved me. Thank you for recognizing the growth and maturity in my poetry. Your words inspire me to continue embracing authenticity and finding happiness in ordinary moments. Grateful for your encouragement. Blessings, Daniel
Date: 2/29/2024 7:03:00 PM
I love this poem. So aesthetically pleasing and honest, well done, kelli
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Date: 3/1/2024 4:25:00 AM
Good Morning, Kelli. It was so lovely to see your note this morning. Thank you for your kindness and comments. - Blessings, Daniel
Date: 2/29/2024 5:49:00 PM
An intriguing poem of rebellion in youth and early adulthood, Daniel. Your poem resonated with me on a deep level. I've always seemed to need my inner creativity to make it through what seemed mundane and boring in life. I didn't do things so much for attention from others or to be rebellious, it was my authentic self, trying to survive. Thanks for the insight into to the living- on-the-edge life which I do suspect at least reflected parts of your own. Have a pleasant evening, my friend. BB
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Date: 3/1/2024 4:24:00 AM
Dear Bill, your thoughtful reflection on my poem truly touched me. Knowing that my words could evoke such a deep connection within you is comforting. Your authenticity in navigating life's challenges through creativity mirrors my own journey. Thank you for sharing your insights. Wishing you a pleasant weekend filled with inspiration. Blessings, Daniel
Date: 2/29/2024 2:43:00 PM
Daniel, love this poem on rebellion and beating to your own drum. Having laughter and magic in your heart makes life worth while. Hugs
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Date: 3/1/2024 6:41:00 AM
Dear Cecilia, Thank you for stopping by and for your affirmative comments. I look forward to reading more of your poems this weekend! - Blessings, Daniel
Date: 2/29/2024 10:49:00 AM
Greetings Daniel! For the creative mind the mundane seems like a numbing sedative. Yet, through your poetic quest for the extraordinary you have discovered the true "joy" in the simple and the complex. Wisdom gained through your pilgrimage - "the jester unmasked!" So many wonderful images speak your allegorical quest. I love the depth, and wisdom, of your poems. If this is for a contest, best wishes. Blessings!
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Date: 3/1/2024 4:22:00 AM
Dear Sam, your response to my poem deeply touched me. Your appreciation for the depth and wisdom within it means the world to me. Thank you for recognizing the allegorical quest I embarked upon and for your heartfelt words of encouragement. Your support fuels my creative fire. Blessings to you always. Daniel
Date: 2/29/2024 8:16:00 AM
WOW!!! I just read your wonderful write. What a great ending. Life is an adventure/not always easy but we can learn along the way... Have a blessed/great day writing away...............
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Date: 2/29/2024 9:45:00 AM
Hello Paula, thank you for stopping by and reading my poem along with your kind comments. It is always good to see your thoughts. - Blessings, Daniel
Date: 2/29/2024 6:58:00 AM
Hi Daniel , this is so incredibly insightful, it's as if I was reading an account of my own childhood. If by some miracle this isn't you , the protagonist, then you have the most wonderful and inventive imagination , the words and imagery flow effortlessly , and will resonate with so many others . I was this person. Absolutely word perfect , simply sublime, my favourite poem .
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Date: 2/29/2024 7:32:00 AM
Hello Daniel, your words mean the world to me. Knowing that my poem connected with you on such a personal level is incredibly gratifying. I am the protagonist, and perhaps because we are both named Daniel there may be a link (LOL). Thank you for your kind and encouraging feedback. - Blessings, Daniel
Date: 2/29/2024 5:18:00 AM
A juxtaposition of normal values written in a fun manner. Very well written and much admired.
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Date: 2/29/2024 5:22:00 AM
Hello Victor, Thanks for your affirmations and I have enjoyed reading your poems on a regular basis. - Blessings, Daniel
Date: 2/29/2024 5:00:00 AM
This is excellent. A journey in life, finding one's magic and exploring the mundane. Well written Daniel :)
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Date: 2/29/2024 5:18:00 AM
Dear Heidi, Thank you for stopping by and leaving your wonderful comment. I always appreciate it and hope you have a great day. - Blessings, Daniel
Date: 2/28/2024 7:09:00 PM
Simply astounding write! I willlet all the brilliant vouces before me soeak pkease ., please firgive me. I woulld not dare share my wilness, nor expiund on my my inner jouneys. Its too lare, I expised myself in over 3,300 piems. I would never do that again. Sometimes we have to learm the hard way! Blessings, Pangie
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Date: 2/29/2024 5:21:00 AM
Dearest Pangie, Your humility and honesty shine through your comments. Your respect for others' voices and your own journey is admirable. Your vulnerability in over 3,300 poems is a testament to your courage as a writer. Thank you for sharing your wisdom and blessings. - Blessings, Daniel
Date: 2/28/2024 4:08:00 PM
Marching to the beat of his own drum, finding joy in rebellion, but mellowing out to explore the mundane, Great write Daniel
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Date: 2/29/2024 5:19:00 AM
Hello Joe, Thanks for stopping by and, yes, finding the joy in all that we do. It is always great to hear from you. - Blessings, Daniel
Date: 2/28/2024 8:12:00 AM
Hi Daniel, I enjoyed this as it provided wonderful insight to you and your personal growth. There probably are a few others of us out there who can easily identify. I for one know that some of my earlier school teachers would have put me in the rebel category. Blessings..
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Date: 2/28/2024 8:19:00 AM
Hello Nancy, my Rebel Friend, Thank you for your kindness, friendship, and comments. I always appreciate reading your poems and comments. Something about not always going with the flow sparking new creativity, and I suppose that is why we are poets. - Blessings, Daniel
Date: 2/28/2024 6:53:00 AM
Well done Daniel or well lived perhaps;) Very relatable even to those utterly mundane :) My Damocles Sword that you kindly commented on has been influenced by my 30 year old daughter who “looks down” at me for not drinking even in all inclusive resort I’m in now. She calls us boring, not a grown-up term, I know. My attempts to impart wisdom that beauty of life lies in clear vision of what is, not of what seems to be - falls short. For now. Generation gap in full display:)
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Date: 2/28/2024 8:16:00 AM
Dear Margarita, Thank you for sharing, I can definitely relate! It seems the struggle to find acceptance and understanding across generations is timeless. While your daughter may not appreciate your perspective now, keep imparting your wisdom. (I have 3 Daughters) It's those seeds of love and understanding, planted now, that may blossom with time. After all, sometimes the greatest impact comes from simply living authentically - a powerful lesson in itself. Wishing you strength on your journey :) - Blessings, Daniel
Date: 2/28/2024 6:49:00 AM
Quite an intellectual discourse, Daniel. You have searched the mind and soul to produce work of wisdom. Your introspection is a superb walk through in powerful diction.
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Date: 2/28/2024 8:13:00 AM
Hello Vijay, Thank you so much for your inspirational words and they are very appreciative. I also thank you for your friendship as a poet. I enjoy reading your poems! - Blessings, Daniel
Date: 2/28/2024 5:04:00 AM
Daniel, when you offer insight to your writes, I refrain from reading your explanation, preferring to read without knowing your prompt. I saw you right away in these lines and laughed through the entire creative confession. I couldn't help but wonder what thoughts your mother had when you told her they're not the kind to bring home. You unmasked yourself, but I had a peek before you removed it. Your English/Lit teacher would be proud of your poetic talent. Your poetry is magical to me.
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Date: 2/28/2024 6:08:00 AM
We've established a mutual admiration society of two. ;-) I knew you must've had a source of impetus for your level of poetry. Kudos for your teacher for if not for her you might not have risen to be a poet of awesome verses. You were quite a rebel in those days... maybe now, too? shhh I won't tell your secrets. Consider yourself hugged.
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Date: 2/28/2024 6:03:00 AM
Dearest Lin, Wow, reading your comment felt like a warm hug! Thank you so much for the kind words. I'm amazed you found my voice in the poem so clearly; your laughter while reading is the highest compliment. It makes me so happy to know that my words can create a sense of magic for you. My 11th- 12th grade English teacher is the reason I write poetry based on her positive feedback. And you always inspire me! - Blessings, Daniel
Date: 2/28/2024 3:37:00 AM
Love it! The taming power of life! I really appreciate how you managed not to make the spirit feel deflated, gaged or defeated but instead soothed and calmed...as if he found the nectar in life The lion laying down with the lamb In peaceful repose
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Date: 2/28/2024 4:46:00 AM
Dear Ingrid, Thank you so much for your thoughtful comment on my poem! Your words, "Love it! The taming power of life!" truly made my day. I especially appreciate your insightful observation about how the poem "managed not to make the spirit feel deflated, gaged or defeated but instead soothed and calmed...as if he found the nectar in life." That was exactly the feeling I was hoping to evoke, and it means a lot that you picked up on that intention. It's a testament to your own creativity and interpretation, and I find it deeply enriching. Thank you again for taking the time to read and comment on my work. It's truly rewarding to connect with you. - Blessings, Daniel
Date: 2/27/2024 4:37:00 PM
Daniel, this informative poem is also fun to read. Perhaps if your teachers had somehow allowed more fun in the class, you might have seen this sooner, but who knows? I think I still have just a touch of fascination being a bit off. However, that is only because I believe we are on some kind of suicidal quest as a species and this needs to be dealt with. I try to with poetry and also in life. The key as I think you suggest, is to present ideas in an unthreatening manner. You are a sage.
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Date: 2/27/2024 5:34:00 PM
Dear Duke, your comment warmed my heart! "Informative but fun" is the ideal balance I strive for. While I missed "playful learning," it fueled a unique perspective. I appreciate your honesty, and I share your concern for our future. Poetry, like your message, can spark change in captivating ways. Thank you, wise reader! - Blessings, Daniel
Date: 2/27/2024 4:36:00 PM
a compelling story written in rhyme! How brilliant. I could identify with you, for I was one of those 'defiant' gals until I learned the lesson you did--the greatest adventure is finding the magic in one's self. Reminds me a bit of "The Impossible Dream"--to run where the brave dare not go. Have you ever read BLESSED ARE THE WEIRD by Jacoby Nordby. Reading it might be right up your alley. It was life affirming for me years ago. Am faving this poem...well done!
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Date: 2/27/2024 5:32:00 PM
Wow, Sara! Your words mean the world. "Defiant gals" finding magic within - that's exactly the message I hoped to share. "The Impossible Dream" connection is incredible! You might be right - "BLESSED ARE THE WEIRD" sounds perfect. So grateful for your comment and recommendation and I have not read that book but I will put it in my reading list. Thanks, Sara! - Blessings, Daniel
Date: 2/27/2024 1:24:00 PM
A very complete poem with so much of interest. I liked the story. (Is it possible that he still rides a motorcycle for old times sake?) Good poem. Thanks.
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Date: 2/27/2024 2:58:00 PM
Dear Hilda, thank you for your kind note. I still ride motorcycles from time to time letting that wind blow through my now gray hair. - Blessings, Daniel
Date: 2/27/2024 1:10:00 PM
I'm trying to work out your age from the clues in your poem Daniel.. I'm certainly leaning to your youth existing during the punk / new wave era just from your first stanza. Hey, I like to guess such things. :) Of all the lines in your poem I think the following two hit home more than any others for me: "For the truest defiance, lies not in the fight, But accepting oneself, in the ordinary light." Cheers - Gary
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Date: 2/27/2024 3:01:00 PM
Hello Gary, it brought me great joy to read your note. I am actually a product of the 60 and 70s, grad in 75’. All the calls for revolution, change, hippies, era. etc.. I find that era to be my sweet spot for music also although I am fairly eclectic. - Blessings, Daniel
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