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The breadth of breaths a breast can heave Dark depths so delved as falsehoods leave From tongues, the tangled webs we weave That trap our own good wills Though false, how fast it fills (And how that kindness kills) Sweet sentience sent with sense, descends Love's fondness found when friendship ends Thoughts, tender, flamed to fire from friends On words, deceitful, breaking All hearts so prone to aching While passions pass as faking Pressed past what passed as fast and bound The festooned farce that hearts would hound Found dreams and deeds the doubt to drown Amidst the rambling brambles The flimflam scam in shambles To seed a greed that gambles The dreaming damned should cram with doubt Their tares turned torn from thorns that flout Those prickled sticks stuck through and stout Milled phrases, grand and golden So feigned and drained, beholden Staged rages, gauged and olden ... Through trust, the thrust of thoughts is through Those toughest troughs, though thorough, too Thoughts fraught with falsehoods brought anew Will shed their virtues, fraying The ways that weigh decaying Far faster than they're saying Truth lost, lest lies left praying Were prayers precisely playing For death's last breath obeying ... It's own ... it's own ... it's own. ~ 1st Place ~ in the "Strand Completely New 20, Any Form, Any Theme" Poetry Contest, Brian Strand, Judge & Sponsor.

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Date: 6/12/2021 8:11:00 PM
So very wondrously weaved my friend. EVERY VERSE FLOWING FROM A MOST DELIGHTFULLY MASTERFUL PEN~ A fav.. a true gem too. God bless...
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Date: 8/12/2020 8:11:00 PM
Straight to my favs list. This is so nice. I hope I get to this level someday. My everyday prayer. Best regards. Phred
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Date: 8/12/2020 8:42:00 AM
A fav for me Greg. so much truth. Well penned my friend.
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Date: 8/12/2020 6:59:00 AM
Most thrilling work! Highest praise does your fine ability no justice. Behold, here is poetry's cutting edge.
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Date: 8/12/2020 2:25:00 AM
Splendid work dear Gregory sir..:-) I enjoyed the lines blended with alliterations and wonderful imageries..:-) I hope your keeping well ! Missed reading your poem from past few days.. Stay healthy.Keep inspiring us.Take care.Warm regards sent to you..:-)
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Date: 8/10/2020 6:47:00 AM
This is really good G, glad to see you're still posting!
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