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Once vibrant and alive, hope danced in our eyes, But now, a flickering ember, slowly it dies. Time's cruel touch, it weaves its bitter thread, Unraveling love, leaving hearts heavy with dread. The promises once made, like whispers in the wind, Now fade away, like echoes that rescind. Love, once a flame that burned with fiery passion, Now flickers weakly, consumed by life's ration. Age, with its relentless grip, takes its toll, Lines etched upon faces; stories yet untold. Youth's vigor wanes, as strength starts to fade, Leaving behind a yearning for time's escapade. Once vibrant and alive, hope danced in our hearts, But now, a wilted flower, it slowly departs. Dreams once held dear, like fragile petals fall, Withered by the weight of age's relentless call. Amidst all the decay, a glimmer still remains, A spark of resilience, refusing to be chained. For even in the twilight, hope can still arise, Love can find solace; age can bring surprise.

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Date: 9/10/2023 10:55:00 PM
Jay, wonderful writing and congratulations on your win in my contest, I like your image quote also, Constance
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Date: 9/10/2023 8:59:00 PM
"Amidst all the decay, a glimmer still remains" - Great work. Congratulations!
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Date: 9/10/2023 8:34:00 PM
Back to your beautiful poem with congratulations on your great win !
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Date: 9/10/2023 8:51:00 AM
Dear Jay, I am thrilled to extend my heartfelt congratulations on your well-deserved victory in the contest podium.
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Date: 9/8/2023 1:41:00 AM
Age puts shackles and chains on our hands and legs. Our movements become slow, dreams and hopes wane. Still all is not over. "Love can find solace; age can bring surprise." Beautifully written. All the Best.
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Date: 9/7/2023 2:06:00 AM
- "Age, with its relentless grip, takes its toll" ... but never extinguish the flame of love ... a sensitive poem, Jay - hugs
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Date: 9/6/2023 10:47:00 AM
A well written thoughtful poem Jay. So glad that you ended it this way "For even in the twilight, hope can still arise, Love can find solace; age can bring surprise." Love the ending is so uplifting. You did well. BOL
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