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Death of Poetry

I gaze beyond the silver winged heart of twinkling twilight, lost within metaphors in warm cashmere bows of midnight. Whilst lava lamps for lost souls f l i c k e r across a maze of melancholy, ghosts of past whispered surreal sagas through subtle mists~ silky snow that d r i z z l e s in the shape of crescent, slowly trails my moon-kissed skin. If only the stars of scarred silence spoke the voiceless truth raised from the arms of trauma~ not every glowing ray is destined to be your wish come true, I was sculptured in hailstones of burnt ice, and my ivory nails drowned in the color of your fire blood. I am the throned mistress of massacres, a walking black storm, that strikes onyx lightning upon pearlescent roads to hyacinth healing. For everything I touched became frost, when heavy clouds bled to paint the skyscape in citrine powder. Perhaps, there is no need of stretching your fingers in gratitude, as it shall soon abandon every lucky charm, like the death of poetry within inked pages of an accidental poet. Yet, I still see the unwritten verses in your dewy eyes~ unsung poetic confessions, written in diamond and rust; “you’re the poison I’m willing to take” Like how romeo died in the name of a forsaken tale told by the infatuated soul of his Juliet~ Cupid’s bow still is adorned with her love-struck tears that emanate unshed truth. So let, the alchemy of dreams concoct, a perfumed potion from black quartz rain, to ease this caricature lifetime of memories~ chasing sonnets contrived in sorcery, to seize the stories of misplaced prophecies. whilst hope is flying on paper wings of a dark horse carousel, where my past self was crystal-gazing, to see the crown carved from rhinestones of shattered glasses, piercing through my honey mane. But, this immortal heart will remain in a museum of Monet’s garden, where sorrowful serenades linger above thornless roses. For I am heaven and hell for you, in everlasting awakenings transcribed in turquoise topaz till tomorrow…

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Date: 3/11/2024 5:11:00 PM
Powerful and breathtaking- congrats on your win
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Date: 3/7/2024 8:26:00 PM
Dear Empress, I’m delighted to return with my heartiest congratulations for your wonderful win in Brian’s contest. Warmest wishes soulful poetess.. ~Susan
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Date: 3/7/2024 7:28:00 PM
IE, if you're saying that not every ray out in the heavens reflects happiness--that might not be a bad thing. We need to celebrate both the good and bad that we feel. It all brings us to where we are. So, is it just the deathly or dark emotions in poetry that you are referring to? Sorry I be so dense and simplistic!
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Date: 3/8/2024 2:10:00 PM
Ah that line dear duke means, not everything is as it seems, they say not all that which glitters is gold, and not everyone that comes to us dressed as angels and saviors are actually what they claim to be, life is full of deceitful faces and smiles. I tend to get more metaphorical. Sometimes, thank you for asking and thank you for commenting despite how different i write to you. You are very kind and generous. Im grateful
Date: 3/7/2024 8:53:00 AM
Dear Empress, North star poetess, your use of rich metaphors and intriguing imageries always ignites and excites my heart's imagination. Such a vivid outpouring of elegant, eloquent, expressive emotions. They sizzle as they drizzle down the poetic page to saturate it, and this reader, with your emotive and evocative artistic brilliance. Intense, tender, poignant, breathtaking! Belated congrats for POTD honors - such worthy choice! Warmest wishes, my soulful poetic friend.. ~Susan
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Date: 3/8/2024 2:08:00 PM
Thank you so much dear poetic soul im grateful for your poetic presence and kind and generous support always, ah north star, i love that. Your comments are as poetic as your poetry, appreciate you truly. Sending you light always
Date: 3/7/2024 4:09:00 AM
Wow!! You are a very mixed person to be heaven and hell. I feel for the person in your life who won't know if it will be heaven on earth today or hell on earth. Or is it you issue back what they give out? Sara K
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Date: 3/7/2024 4:17:00 AM
your comment made me smile , haha. Its not literal dear sara. They get what they give sending you light always
Date: 3/6/2024 9:10:00 PM
What a stunning POTD, a crown carved in rhinestones; how lovely is the imagery in your poem, dear Inky! Great to see you shine today. Congratulations amazing poetess, you so deserve the glory ...Love and Hugs
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Date: 3/7/2024 3:17:00 AM
You are so sweet dear maria i appreciate you so very much always thank you so much
Date: 3/6/2024 6:41:00 PM
You can ' still see unwritten verses, ' while hope flies on paper wings. I separated a few of your thoughts because I'm embracing the softness within. Poetry lives forever. You paint such vivid images with your words. Congratulations Ink, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy
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Date: 3/7/2024 3:14:00 AM
Thank you so much brandy, i appreciate your well wishes and kind feedback
Date: 3/6/2024 11:22:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD Ink Empress! Poetry that has proven over & over again to be top notch, amazing piece."this immortal heart will remain in a museum of Monet’s garden, where sorrowful serenades linger above thornless roses." stunning metaphors one of the best lines. I enjoyed. Enjoy your day! Warm wishes~Anaya
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Date: 3/7/2024 3:08:00 AM
Its always so good to hear from you dear anaya, thank you so very much for your kindness and heartfelt wishes. Sending you light always
Date: 3/6/2024 9:39:00 AM
Congratulations for this amazing POTD . Enjoy :)
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Date: 3/7/2024 3:04:00 AM
Thank you so much dear heidi im grateful for your support
Date: 3/6/2024 9:21:00 AM
Congratulations on POTD. I'm not surprised as this is a flawless poem.
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Date: 3/6/2024 9:33:00 AM
Thank you so very much really always. For your kind and generous support dear hilda grateful
Date: 3/6/2024 9:06:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD, Inky! A worthy poem for this honor. Enjoy your special day of recognition, my friend. Bill
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Date: 3/6/2024 9:16:00 AM
Thank you dear bill so very much for your kind support always grateful
Date: 3/6/2024 8:28:00 AM
returning, dearest Ink, to congratulate you on your exquisite poem receiving POTD designation. You're truly worthy of any and all poetic accolades that come your way. Hugs, Sara
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Date: 3/6/2024 9:10:00 AM
Awwm thank you sweet sara always for your generous and kind support
Date: 3/6/2024 7:46:00 AM
Congratulations Sweet Ink on POTD!! Makes me happy seeing your name up in lights haha! Well done….Debx
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Date: 3/6/2024 7:52:00 AM
You are such a sweet soul, im grateful for your support always dear debsz. Sending you light always
Date: 3/6/2024 7:01:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. Your "Death of Poetry" is an amazing write. I love it/love the ending. Here is a smile for your heart. "Smile"  FAV for me... Have a wonderful day with your wonderful win...................
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Date: 3/6/2024 7:44:00 AM
Thank you so very much dear payla for the fave and your comment i am grateful for your support always
Date: 3/6/2024 6:47:00 AM
How sweet you always get POTD after me and you have received it for a great poem.. Despite the somber tone of the poem, there is an underlying sense of resilience and transformation. The poet acknowledges the pain and sorrow of the past but also embraces the possibility of healing and renewal. The imagery of "alchemy of dreams" and "perfumed potion" suggests a desire for transformation and transcendence, turning pain into art and beauty.. The use of poetic language and unconventional structure enhances the poem's emotional impact and depth. The fragmented lines and disjointed syntax mirror the fragmented nature of memory and experience, while the use of enjambment and repetition creates a sense of rhythm and momentum, propelling the reader forward through your introspective journey.
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Date: 3/6/2024 7:45:00 AM
Your comment made me smile, thank you dear silent one for your generous and kind comment that is so detailed as always, youv understood the poem, grateful for your poetic presence
Date: 3/6/2024 6:22:00 AM
Back with Hearty Congrats on POTD, dear Ink. Enjoy your honor today.
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Date: 3/6/2024 7:45:00 AM
Thank you so much dr sotto appreciate your support always
Date: 3/6/2024 6:15:00 AM
Back with BIG congrats on POTD, Ink. Enjoy your special day today.
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Date: 3/6/2024 7:50:00 AM
Thank you always dear Vijay. Im grateful for your kind support throughout:
Date: 3/6/2024 5:59:00 AM
Congratulations for poem of the day, enjoy your day in the sun IE
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Date: 3/6/2024 7:55:00 AM
Thank you so much; grateful for the sun.
Date: 3/6/2024 5:41:00 AM
Dear Ink poetess, A hearty congratulations on this deep and well crafted POTD. The "lava lamps for lost souls" and the "dark horse carousel", real brought him home for me. Outstanding poetry, as always, you are one gifted girly..
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Date: 3/6/2024 7:56:00 AM
Dear nancy, this is so kind of you to say, im truly grateful for always your kindness and support, i appreciate you also quoting lines that you liked. Sending you light always
Date: 3/6/2024 5:34:00 AM
Glad this gem made the spotlight Inky. Worthy
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Date: 3/6/2024 7:59:00 AM
Ah tomsz thank you for your earlier comment, was so kind and i loved that word you wrote too in the comment, creative. And you are a strong feeler of energy, i needed those words, so thank you! Very much always truly
Date: 3/6/2024 5:18:00 AM
INk, congratulations on POTD.
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Date: 3/6/2024 8:00:00 AM
Thank you dear tania
Date: 3/6/2024 5:12:00 AM
Another marvel of poetic creation.... ! I am swept away in the surge of emotions. You are never an accidental poet and poetry in you will not die. You are indeed a weaver of striking images and metaphors, one who juggles with words and emotions. In your poems, there is always a contradiction between pain and joy, hope and despair, light and darkness, and pain always predominating. The mention of Romeo and Juliet raises the poem to classic proportions in love. "Yet, I still see the unwritten verses in your dewy eyes~ unsung poetic confessions, written in diamond and rust;“you’re the poison I’m willing to take.” In your poems one can see the struggle not to get drowned in the turbulence of life and the effort to spring back with resilience. No wonder this poem has become the POTD. Congratulations, dear Empress!
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Date: 3/6/2024 8:01:00 AM
Dear sweet valsa! You are unforgettable really! Your sincerity and sweet words, always make my day, and make me feel like im good enough. Thank you for being so generous with your time and for reading soulfully, and leaving such uplifting comments and also well wishes. Sending back light to you always
Date: 3/6/2024 5:01:00 AM
in warm cashmere bows of midnight… not every glowing ray is destined to be your wish come true… mistress of massacres, a walking black storm…and so much more! Congratulations on POTD, Ink! Fave!
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Date: 3/6/2024 8:07:00 AM
Dear kim, that means alot really, your fave and also your comment and well wishes, thank you so very much for being so generous: im grateful: sending you light always
Date: 3/6/2024 5:00:00 AM
Such enticing lines and beautiful story telling, congratulations on POTD x
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Date: 3/6/2024 8:10:00 AM
Thank you dear dd always grateful for your support
Date: 3/6/2024 4:29:00 AM
Back with Congrats on POTD empress
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Date: 3/6/2024 8:13:00 AM
Thank you so very much dear joseph grateful
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