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64 Quotes After Grief and Life After Loss Whats your Grief

"Those we love don't go away; They walk beside us every day; Unseen, unheard but always near; Still loved, still missed, and dear." Quote_ Anonymous I will never forget when mother passed, with one last gasp her soul entered a new domain: her body died and she had peace at last, but the love that we shared will never ever wane; for I believe after death we live on, we are in two realms and are never truly gone. In a pretty cemetery she rests, but when I visit .. my mother's soul is not there: for I believe in this world we are guests, I touch that name stone engraved and say a prayer; my mother's soul surrounds me each new day, she is that bird song, the rain, snow and trees that sway. Heaven's golden gate will never be chained, and mother's soul I embrace ... until my last breath: for I shorn my human fear of the unexplained, I let go of ignorance about death; no longer am I blind in the darkness of gloom, each soul exists beyond an earthly tomb. I live each moment in the present now, accept that my mother's death I will always grieve: found my higher self on the path to Tao, and a new map and unique existence ... I weave; a way taking me to sublime insight, where each day I am bathed in golden sunlight. ____________________ April 02, 2023 Poetry/Rhyme/Death Of A Loved One COPYRIGHT PROTECTED, ID 04-1538-813-02 All Rights Reserved, 2023, Constance La France Written for the Premiere contest, Death Of Loved One sponsor, Unseeking Seeker, Judged 04/05/2023 First Place

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Date: 4/7/2023 9:20:00 AM
Beautiful, Constance! 'for I believe in this world we are guests...' I love this. Congratulations!
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Date: 4/7/2023 11:02:00 AM
Ann, thank you so much for the compliment, comment and congratulations !
Date: 4/6/2023 7:07:00 AM
Congratulations on your Trophy win, Dear Constance. "she is that bird song, the rain, snow and trees that sway." - how beautiful, tender, serene! Love and hugs ~ Mala
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Constance La France
Date: 4/6/2023 8:50:00 PM
Mala, thank you so much for the congratulations and compliment !
Date: 4/6/2023 2:23:00 AM
- Congratulations on your top win in the contest, Constance :) - Happy Easter :) - hugs
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Constance La France
Date: 4/6/2023 8:51:00 PM
Sunshine, thank you so much for the congratulations, hugs !
Date: 4/6/2023 1:43:00 AM
Congratulations Constance on your top most win for your heartfelt writing !
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Constance La France
Date: 4/6/2023 8:52:00 PM
Valsa, thank you so much for the congratulations and compliment. !
Date: 4/3/2023 8:32:00 PM
We all grieve the loss of our dear mothers. No one in the world can ever fill a mother's place. The pain of separation will never leave us, but the thought that they live in a sphere far more sweeter than ours make us happy. Though they have vacated their earthly tomb, they reside under heaven's golden dome. Beautiful sentiments Constance.
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Constance La France
Date: 4/4/2023 8:57:00 AM
Valsa, thank you so much for the lovely comment, and compliment !
Date: 4/2/2023 11:54:00 AM
- I'll never forget that either when my mother passed (and father) - Visited my mother and father's grave today... their souls live in my heart until I meet them again... - A beautiful poem, Constance - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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Constance La France
Date: 4/2/2023 12:37:00 PM
Sunshine, I have lost both parents also and they live in my heart too and always will. Thank you so much for the compliment and encouragement, hugs!

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