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There were no tears of sorrow when she passed No suffering or pain, a quiet death Though many questioned just how long she'd last Few noticed when she took her final breath So many photographs and memories With family and friends while she was here She shared her time and warmth so willingly Forever will we hold her days so dear Though she has passed we will continue on There will be many gloomy days ahead Some days her memory will flash at dawn And some nights when we crawl into our bed For now let's raise our glass at summer's wake Cause soon it will be autumn's leaves we'll rake original poem by Daniel Turner

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Charlie Smith

Date: 8/3/2018 3:52:00 PM

I'm glad I went back for this one DT, beautifully written my friend...

Abosede Ogundare

Date: 9/24/2016 9:59:00 AM

A nice sonnet Daniel...

Daniel Turner
Date: 7/22/2018 5:51:00 PM

Thank you, Abosede. For me, the highest compliment of all is when someone takes the time to read and comment on my older poems. I am honored. I have missed you. I hope you are well. Take care:)

Daniel Turner

Date: 9/13/2016 12:04:00 PM

Thank you Mrs. Sara. I appreciate your thoughtfulness and always look forward to your visits.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/13/2016 10:25:00 AM

Your English Sonnet was awesome, creative and unique..Congratulations on your placement..Sara

Daniel Turner
Date: 9/13/2016 9:20:00 PM

Thank you Mrs. Sara. I appreciate your thoughtfulness and always look forward to your visits.

Sandra Haight

Date: 9/11/2016 7:04:00 PM

Daniel, congratulations on your podium win for this so wonderfully written seasonal Sonnet as a farewell to summer. You have mastered the meter and rhyme so well! 7 Sandra

Daniel Turner
Date: 9/11/2016 8:17:00 PM

Thank you Mrs Sandra. I appreciate your friendly visits and kind comments. You are so thoughtful. Have a nice evening:):)

Lu Loo

Date: 9/11/2016 2:10:00 PM

DT, I am excited for fall, yet miss the summer, very well written sonnet dear friend :) congratulations on your placement in the contest :)-luloo

Daniel Turner
Date: 9/11/2016 2:38:00 PM

Thank you, Laura. I appreciate your thoughtfulness and your kindness. Thanks for leaving your smile:):)

Eve Roper

Date: 9/10/2016 7:07:00 PM

Daniel, congratulations on your 3rd place win, beautiful written . Hugs Eve

Daniel Turner
Date: 9/11/2016 12:35:00 PM

Thank you Mrs Eve for letting me participate in your contest and for the recognition. I appreciate your kindness:)

Constance La France

Date: 9/10/2016 7:05:00 PM

Daniel, oh I mourn summer's passing too, and yet I am ready to embrace fall's beauty and cool air, great write ~

Daniel Turner
Date: 9/10/2016 8:02:00 PM

Thank you Constance. I'm so glad you stopped by. I am looking forward to fall but not raking the leaves. Summer was so hot this year. I am ready for cooler weather. It's always a pleasure to see you. I appreciate your support and your kindness:)

Paul Callus

Date: 9/10/2016 4:58:00 PM

A lovely sonnet where personification takes pride of place, Daniel. I always feel a sort of sadness when summer departs, though I have nothing against autumn! Regards // paul

Daniel Turner
Date: 9/10/2016 5:08:00 PM

Thank you, Paul. It's just so hot here in the summer by the time fall rolls around we are ready for a break from the heat. I appreciate you dropping by to read and for your support:)

Mike Hauser

Date: 9/10/2016 8:26:00 AM

Beautifully written...

Winged Warrior

Date: 9/9/2016 5:21:00 AM

Where do I send my flowers Daniel...although she gave to me in the first place...I'll shall miss her too lol...great write my friend...god bless and good bye summer...^WW^

Daniel Turner
Date: 9/9/2016 10:19:00 AM

Thank you Wingman, Just put them in a vase and set them on your table. I appreciate your kindness and always enjoy your friendliness.

Jeannie Cronin

Date: 9/8/2016 8:47:00 PM

Hi Daniel, Summer never really dies She merely takes a rest And faithfully returns each year To gift us all her best. I like the Fall, but I'm a Summer girl at heart! Cool write Daniel!!

Daniel Turner
Date: 9/8/2016 9:20:00 PM

Thank you, Jeannie. I was looking at it as if each spring is the birth of a new cycle, therefore each season lives and dies but I get what you are saying. I am not a fan of winter's bite but I suppose each season has a gift to offer:) I am thrilled you stopped by for a visit:):)

John Hamilton

Date: 9/8/2016 5:29:00 PM

We had 32 degrees today(celsius) so that's hot so summer hasn't died yet she's still on life support. Great write Daniel!

Daniel Turner
Date: 9/8/2016 5:38:00 PM

Lol Yes John, it's still hot here too. Just putting in my order early. My yard is dying and a few of the leaves are just starting to turn. Probably another 3 weeks I'd guess. Thanks for dropping by. Your support means a lot.

Laura Leiser

Date: 9/8/2016 4:34:00 PM

Very clever twist, Daniel! Thinking it was one thing, but surprise...it's another! Great write :)

Daniel Turner
Date: 9/8/2016 4:46:00 PM

Very clever reader, Laura. Not everybody has picked up on it. Thank you for dropping by. I appreciate your kindness and always enjoy sharing a smile:)

Tom Quigley

Date: 9/8/2016 11:04:00 AM

A lovely tribute.

Daniel Turner
Date: 9/8/2016 12:05:00 PM

The death of summer. We will miss her. Thanks Tom! It's always a pleasure.

Probir Gupta

Date: 9/8/2016 6:54:00 AM

Facts die ... Emotions linger ... beautifully shown ...

Daniel Turner
Date: 9/8/2016 7:09:00 AM

Thank you for dropping by Probir. I always enjoy your friendly visits. I appreciate your time, support and your kindness.

Sarban Bhattacharya

Date: 9/8/2016 6:12:00 AM

A nice sonnet with an elegiac note, Daniel.

Daniel Turner
Date: 9/8/2016 7:08:00 AM

Hello Sarban. Thank you so much. I am glad you dropped in. I will be looking for more of you wonderful poetry very soon:) I think you are an extremely talented young man:) I appreciate the friendly visit and wonderful comments.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 9/8/2016 3:42:00 AM

I didn't see this coming Daniel. Brilliant! I love the surprise ending! A fave from me Daniel! 7 ; )

Daniel Turner
Date: 9/8/2016 7:05:00 AM

Aw Mrs Connie, You know I can never resist a little humor. I so appreciate your kindness and friendly visits. Thanks for dropping by and flashing that beautiful smile:)

Jan Allison

Date: 9/8/2016 2:07:00 AM

Wonderful personification Daniel - I love the transition of the seasons... autumn is fast approaching and its my favourite time of year:-) hugs Jan xx

Daniel Turner
Date: 9/8/2016 7:03:00 AM

Thank you, Jan for stopping by to read and comment. I too love autumn especially the cooling temps. Hope your day is going well. Thanks for sharing a smile:)

Meenakshi Raina

Date: 9/7/2016 11:14:00 PM

What a wonderful write....I enjoyed the rhythm of your sonnet....it flows so well.

Meenakshi Raina
Date: 9/10/2016 7:25:00 PM

Yes, I realized that it was about the death of summer once I read the last two lines of the poem....the ending came as a surprise. Here in Toronto it still feels like summer....but I know it won't last long....and yes I had a great vacation.

Daniel Turner
Date: 9/7/2016 11:53:00 PM

Thank you Meenakshi, you do realize it is about the death of summer, right? I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment. I hope you enjoyed your vacation:)

Tim Smith

Date: 9/7/2016 9:36:00 PM

Sorry for your loss DT. A beautiful poem.

Daniel Turner
Date: 9/7/2016 9:59:00 PM

Thanks Tim. I was hoping to see you at the wake. I'm so glad you dropped by to share a smile.

Jolene Cheyney

Date: 9/7/2016 4:27:00 PM

Yes, but Autumn has its beauty as well. The rich warm Golds oranges Reds Browns cinnamon colors that are everywhere. I visited the Smokies once was the end of September and the beginning of October 1995. The trees on the hillsides were just beginning to turn color. For at least five years after that every fall I felt homesick for the mountains. I was only there a week but homesick is the only way I can describe it.

Daniel Turner
Date: 9/7/2016 4:33:00 PM

Yes Jolene. Autumn is gorgeous and a wonderful time for poets to stretch their imaginations. I was simply spoofing the death of summer. I agree, The Smokey Mountains are beautiful year round. I drove a truck for 20+ years and have enjoyed all of this country's beautiful landscapes. Thank you for reading and for your insightful comments.