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Oh, there was a past time when though my path was rough: Joy once dallied in my heart but death now dwells- like the frosty silence of a tomb. In agony, I journey a stone path, I am lost in endless weeping and grief. In placid hours come thoughts like a winter dream: Earth embrace him, love, laid to rest! My soul is aching and I am sleepy with numb pain: Joy once dallied in my heart but death now dwells- let him rest with dust in his eyes. Oh, no more will he stir, nor breath, how white the cemetery and how snowed-in. I visit his tomb and stand suspended in time: In this dead place, by a frozen river. Suddenly, the wind is kicking up the snow drifts: the trees shake as a wild wind whistles in winter pines, overhanging boughs pulling my hair: I whisper- is that you my love . . . . _____________________________ March 1, 2019 Poetry/Verse/Death: Now Dwells Copyright Protected, ID 19-1119263-02 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Written for the contest, Dance with Death sponsor, Chantelle Anne Cooke First Place

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Date: 3/29/2019 2:11:00 PM
Hello Dear Heart, wow! You created a lovely poem. Was that him pulling you hair? I wonder. have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 3/29/2019 1:40:00 PM
Totally powerful. You are a poet laureate! Panagiota... Cheers
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Date: 3/5/2019 1:07:00 PM
Congrats Constance, well written in your distinct style.
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Date: 3/3/2019 9:31:00 PM
Congrats on your gold medal win, Constance.
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Date: 3/3/2019 6:41:00 PM
Wow Constance...you are so deserving of your Trophy win! This poem is exquisite in its poignant perfection and going into my Faves! Congratulations on your wonderful win my friend! : ) xxoo
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Date: 3/3/2019 4:17:00 PM
I love this dark rendition of visiting the grave of a deceased lover. Truly magnificent verses! A fav....
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Date: 3/2/2019 4:36:00 AM
Beautifully done, as usual, my friend. Bravo. I wish I could figure out how to upload a video or pictures. Not there yet, and it does make a difference. Makes it ever so nice!
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