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Death Doesn'T Mourn

I met him a long, long time ago, denim clad and dusty leather boots sitting astride a motorcycle He took off his helmet; I stumbled only to stop dead on my hazed tracks and crashed in his ocean sapphire eyes. Scattered bouquets flowers wallpaper, soft silky satin and remnant dreams. Parched lilies quivers upon his grave and falls arched over where it now laves along with till dirt in the hot sun. Death doesn't mourn, but devours lovely things To savor every drop of anguish and narrate the final threads of life with a blithe attitude toward death. 5/17/2018
Poetry Contest: Best Free Verse Poem in May 2018' Sponsored By: Laura Loo
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Gauthier Avatar
January 29, 2021 at 8:06 AM
such a poignant piece ~ well penned
La France Avatar
July 6, 2018 at 1:47 PM
Eve, congratulations on your top win in Laura's contest with this amazing write, well done !
Gentry Avatar
July 4, 2018 at 9:02 AM
Congratulations on your win. This had me from the first. I felt like you were talking about me there with my loss. Beautiful and sad.
Ajmal Avatar
July 3, 2018 at 4:19 PM
It is a really beautiful and heartfelt write, you have used some of the best imagery in it, and I really enjoyed reading it especially the last stanza, it was the most beautiful one, many congratulations on your well deserved win in the contest, good luck and have a really nice day
Scars Avatar
July 3, 2018 at 6:20 AM
death doesn't mourn..so deep, loved every word sweet eve! thank you for your entry and congratulations on your placement :)-luloo
Malik Avatar
May 18, 2018 at 11:39 AM
Death has not date, can come when when we least expect it :(. Sad poem Eve.
Gentile Avatar
May 18, 2018 at 8:46 AM
I found this to be a very eloquent expression, Eve and I agree , sad powerful imagery, so well done . xxoo
Allison Avatar
May 18, 2018 at 2:23 AM
so beautifully penned, such sad imagery Eve... made me quite emotional as we have the TT races coming up and sadly we do have fatalities of both competitors and visitors riding on the circuit:-( hugs jan xx
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