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When I was a young girl death took my hand, and over the years has become my friend: the cemetery more like a woodland, with sorrow I go beyond and transcend; of death many words I have penned. I recall those rooms full of scented rose, tears falling that are now shadows in time: my life was ravaged- my heart and soul froze, but, now this place of tears is where birds chime; like a sweet symphony sublime. And in my last gasp- death will hold my hand; leading me towards that heavenly land. ______________________ March 20, 2023 Poetry/Rhyme/Death: My Bed Of Roses Copyright Protected, ID 03-1532-879-20 All Rights Reserved, 2023, Constance La France Written for the Standard contest, A Simple Poetry Contest sponsor, John Lawless, Judged 03/30/2023 Eighth Place

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Date: 3/31/2023 11:42:00 AM
What an amazing perspective Constance so beautifully enunciated in your words of faith. Yes, we will open our eyes to glory without pain, tears or heartbreaks! Thank you for this lovely, gentle poem. Blessings of peace to you!
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Date: 3/31/2023 1:47:00 PM
Sam, thank you so much for the nice comment and compliment !
Date: 3/30/2023 10:17:00 PM
" death will hold my hand; leading me towards that heavenly land" - like a father or moth leading their child. Beautiful writing, as usual. Congratulations!
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Date: 3/31/2023 1:49:00 PM
Christuraj, thank you so much for the comment, compliment and congratulations. I know most people see death as a dark scary vision, but I don't see it that way !
Date: 3/30/2023 8:48:00 PM
"Rooms full of scented roses." Who doesn't recall that scent! There yesterday hate to say... one day those in their graves will hear God voice and come out, As Job 14 describes so well. Congrats on win!
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Date: 3/31/2023 1:50:00 PM
Barbara, thank you so much for the comment and congratulations, the sweet smell of roses is a hard memory to forget !
Date: 3/30/2023 5:23:00 PM
A fine look at death and hereafter Constance. Congratulations on your win! :)
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Date: 3/31/2023 1:51:00 PM
Linda, thank you so much for the compliment and congratulations !
Date: 3/30/2023 1:03:00 PM
Nicely done Constance, smooth flow and rhyme framing the endless sting of death's sorrows. Thanks for entering the contest
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Date: 3/30/2023 2:36:00 PM
John, thank you so much for the contest, my placement, and the compliment !
Date: 3/25/2023 8:32:00 AM
this is beautiful, especially loved the last two lines x
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Date: 3/25/2023 9:18:00 AM
Jack, thank you so much for the compliment, I love those last two lines also, blessings, Constance
Date: 3/21/2023 11:18:00 AM
Beautiful poem!
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Date: 3/21/2023 3:59:00 PM
Paige, thank you so much for the compliment, blessings, Constance

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