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of the Freudian brothers I must say I prefer intercourse wild agonizingly hot sex lovers dangling on the edge of bed intellectual stimulation at ********’ beckoning a ride into near oblivious bliss crescendo climax culmination recovery but at the end of what is called life the moribund cannot chose and smell of physical loving may turn distant all I ask is for a peaceful good bye a last holding of hands the promise of memories last recall of pheromones and letting go nothingness is highly underrated

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Date: 9/15/2022 3:33:00 PM
Engaging poetry, Kai, and a bit philosophical. I enjoyed the read. Write On! A poet friend in Texas, Bill
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Date: 9/8/2022 2:29:00 PM
Nothingness goes by instantaneously Kai, from its own point of view, because it doesn’t have one, so we best make the most of those moribund moments, and you do quite beautifully and peacefully here, but like yourself I much prefer your first stanza of near oblivious bliss, brilliant writing, cheers David
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Date: 9/4/2022 8:39:00 AM
Another powerful poem Kai. Your last line is meaningful for me. Linda
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Date: 8/15/2022 7:35:00 PM
Indeed and is not death immediate and intimate, as breath exhalation, replayed moment to moment?
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