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Dear Santa, I just want to let you know There's not much time left on the clock for me Please bring someone to make my dim heart glow Another heart to keep mine company Last year, like years before, you passed me by There were no presents underneath my tree My only gifts came from my crying eyes Oh Santa, I am lonely, can't you see But if you don't, I guess I'll understand Just like last year and all the years before There is no one that wants a broken man And lonely I'll remain forevermore Dear Santa, this might be your final chance To grant my Christmas wish for sweet romance by Daniel Turner

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Heidi Sands

Date: 11/3/2016 5:48:00 PM

Daniel - this is strikingly sad. May you have everything you wish for and soon.

Daniel Turner
Date: 11/3/2016 9:02:00 PM

Thank you, Heidi. It's no fun spending holidays alone. I appreciate your kind wishes. Thank you:)

Joanna Daniel

Date: 11/2/2016 10:12:00 AM

Oh, come on Daniel, don't feel sad as yet...Christmas will come with lots of love this time, I'm sure:):) by the way, can you give me your address??;)

Daniel Turner
Date: 11/2/2016 10:39:00 AM

Thank you, Jo. soupmail!!

Eileen Manassian

Date: 10/31/2016 11:55:00 AM

You sure know how to tug at the heart strings. I'm going to FIND jolly Saint Nick and MAKE him do right by you. Lovely poem...hugs

Daniel Turner
Date: 10/31/2016 12:42:00 PM

Thank you, Eileen. I need all the help I can get! I appreciate your friendly visits. You have such a beautiful smile:)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/30/2016 5:44:00 PM

Oh Daniel. you are trying to make us cry!! You gotta get yourself up and FIND a lady. They are everywhere!! STep one, internet dating!!! Good luck to you.

Daniel Turner
Date: 10/31/2016 8:31:00 AM

Oh I see, it's OK when you ladies write sad poems but not us guys, is that it? Lol Thank you for stopping by, Andrea. No thanks on the cyber dating. That's all I need!

John Hardison

Date: 10/29/2016 10:38:00 PM

May Santa grant you your wish. Peace, Love and Joy.

Daniel Turner
Date: 10/30/2016 8:02:00 AM

Thank you, John. What a wonderful thing to say. I wish love, joy and peace also John.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 10/29/2016 7:08:00 PM

Well you will never be truly alone as long as you have poets like us ladies to love and appreciate you through your poetry Daniel. But I do hope Santa grants your wish this year. BELIEVE! And so it shall be. Love, Connie ; ) 7

Daniel Turner
Date: 10/30/2016 8:00:00 AM

Thank you Mrs Connie:) I hope Santa does to! I've got my fingers crossed.

Just James

Date: 10/29/2016 11:28:00 AM

Love your attention to meter and technical writing skill...great write!

Daniel Turner
Date: 10/29/2016 12:12:00 PM

Thank you, James. Such a kind thing to say. I really appreciate your support")

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/29/2016 7:22:00 AM

Oh!! Sad!! Don't think in the negative nor write in the negative..Tell Santa that you know that he has the woman for you..I hope just a work about this situation and not real life for you..Thanks for the visit to my page..I appreciate the kind review.Sara

Daniel Turner
Date: 10/29/2016 9:19:00 AM

Thank you, Mrs Sara but unfortunately this one is true. I have been spending my Christmases alone. I appreciate your positive comments and your friendly visits.

Paloma P

Date: 10/29/2016 7:16:00 AM

Oh, I don't want to think of Santa just yet, but I'll read nevertheless. Bad time of year for many, and the fat guy can be downright mean to grownups! I think you're on your own in the romance department Danny. Send a woman one of your romance poems, that will always prove to win our affections. :)

Daniel Turner
Date: 10/29/2016 7:19:00 AM

"Love letters in the sand" ...washed away by the tide. You can be very sweet when you put your mind to it, Paloma:):)

Vera Duggan

Date: 10/29/2016 2:43:00 AM

Hi Daniel, what a beautiful, sad and touching sonnet, I hope I don't have to suffer like that this christmas, mind you with my family I am sure I won't and I hope you get all you ask for from Santa, take care my friend........Vera

Daniel Turner
Date: 10/29/2016 4:57:00 AM

Thank you, Mrs Vera. I hope my children get to come this year. They didn't get to last year. It makes for a very lonely Christmas. I am glad you get to see your family:)

Ilene Bauer

Date: 10/28/2016 7:50:00 PM

oh, so sad, daniel! beautifully written...

Daniel Turner
Date: 10/29/2016 4:55:00 AM

Thank you, Mrs Ilene. You are so sweet:)

Carol B.

Date: 10/28/2016 5:36:00 PM

Sure hope Santa comes through for you. It's a very moving piece.

Daniel Turner
Date: 10/29/2016 4:54:00 AM

Thank you, Carol. I appreciate your kind wishes:)

Jan Allison

Date: 10/28/2016 3:12:00 PM

This is so touching and sad Daniel. I hope you have been good Daniel and santa brings you that special gift:-)hugs Jan xx

Daniel Turner
Date: 10/29/2016 4:54:00 AM

Thank you, Jan. That's a very sweet thing to say. I'm always a good boy but Santa doesn't seem to stop here anymore.

Chris Green

Date: 10/28/2016 2:18:00 PM

Now why didn't I think of that, I need to write my letter in a hurry. :) Really fun Daniel and sad at the same time. No holiday cheer when it's empty under the tree.

Daniel Turner
Date: 10/29/2016 4:52:00 AM

Thanks Chris. Better get it in early!