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Dear Juliet

Dear Juliet is on her balcony - awash in moonlight. Do you see her there? Her form - how graceful, and her face - how fair! She is a pearl which night stole from the sea and placed beneath the stars to spellbind me! Behold the luster of her auburn hair. The sun has set, bright red, and yet I’d swear it lingers in her long locks so fiery! How fortunate am I in that the Fates have given me the love of Juliet, for she’s a gem while I am but a stone. And see how patiently this goddess waits. She has her pick of any suitor. . . yet she’s chosen me and waits for me alone!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 5/14/2014 10:34:00 PM
A romantic sonnet. Nicely done. I am so behind in reading and commenting. The flu knocked me for 2 months and just getting back on my feet. No energy what so ever. first week that i was able to go out shopping and not be totally exhausted. love phyl
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Date: 3/7/2014 11:49:00 AM
It is the east and Juliet is the sun! Nice poem and very romantic
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Date: 3/2/2014 1:21:00 PM
To turn this Man's stone into shining soul is the most a Man could want from a true love. This absolutely romantic and humbling Andrea. "She is a pearl night stole from the sea..." that's awesome! J.A.B.
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Date: 2/27/2014 3:50:00 PM
Wow! A perfect win for you Andrea and so deserving. Your words make the painting come to life. Big Congratulations on your wonderful Win!
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Date: 2/26/2014 9:54:00 PM
A lovely win Andrea, ,. Congratulations:) goodnight ~SKAT~
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Date: 2/25/2014 4:37:00 PM
How romantic, Andrea. Thanks for writing about me. ; ) Congrats on your #1 placement.
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Date: 2/21/2014 7:26:00 PM
Ok Petal, I just glanced down the contests and see I was right about a handful of wins, including this one, congratulations, will get to the others gradually. Take care, Richard
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Date: 2/21/2014 8:47:00 AM
This would do Romeo proud. LOve, daver
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Date: 2/21/2014 3:31:00 AM
'she’s a gem while I am but a stone'-- wonderful, ANDREA. Congrats on your another big win..
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Date: 2/20/2014 8:54:00 AM
A very lovely poem my dearest friend Andrea. So love it and thoroughly enjoyed reading it this evening. Thank u so much for sharing. Belated congratulations for your top win and the many recent wins! Cheers and biggest hugs to u. Just stopping by for a while at soup before goin to bed. Miss u and your poems. I'll come back soon. Tysm! More blessings! love much and biggest hugs, Leonora
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Date: 2/19/2014 3:47:00 AM
I can see why Isaiah picked this for 1st place it is a write of exquisite beauty and feelings superb pen congrats on 1st place hugs adding to fav's
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Date: 2/18/2014 7:28:00 AM
This is so creative Andrea! Well done n congrats for top place !!
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Date: 2/18/2014 5:53:00 AM
Congrats on the win Andrea,you deserve this.
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Date: 2/18/2014 4:33:00 AM
Good one Andrea and well done on this winner. RobertCDxox
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Date: 2/17/2014 11:54:00 PM
Congrats Andrea...lovely descriptive poem...loved reading it
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Date: 2/17/2014 10:21:00 PM
I love the 4th line...congrats on your big win
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Date: 2/17/2014 9:38:00 PM
Andrea. A very nice piece. You have given us Romeo's thoughts and impression of fair Juliet before in entrance to this infamous scene. As a counterpoint, my own entry gives Juliet's thoughts and impression AFTER the sweet goodnight. Grats! Chris
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Date: 2/17/2014 6:19:00 PM
congrats Andrea on your win
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Date: 2/17/2014 5:20:00 PM
Congrats on first place! Very impressive and descriptive. This poem has the power to make me see very clearly what is transpiring. Juliet is also described in detail; she sounds very beautiful :)
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Date: 2/16/2014 3:49:00 PM
Hiya Petal, I see you more or less followed the story too, Nicely done here though. Take care, Richard
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Date: 2/15/2014 6:42:00 PM
Andrea, love the imagery the sunlight lingering in auburn hair, well done cheers Huberta
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Date: 2/14/2014 1:47:00 PM
Andrea an excellent take on an old theme....David
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Date: 2/13/2014 6:03:00 PM
A grreat write on this eternal story Andrea, thank you for leaving comment on my facebook page, good to read you today'
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Date: 2/13/2014 5:28:00 PM
Spoken with the voice of a suitor in love!! Great piece for the contest, Andrea!!!
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Date: 2/13/2014 4:14:00 PM
William Shakespeare is not around today to read this fine write. I'm sure he would be impressed. I am.
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