Dear Juliet

Dear Juliet is on her balcony - awash in moonlight. Do you see her there? Her form - how graceful, and her face - how fair! She is a pearl which night stole from the sea and placed beneath the stars to spellbind me! Behold the luster of her auburn hair. The sun has set, bright red, and yet I’d swear it lingers in her long locks so fiery! How fortunate am I in that the Fates have given me the love of Juliet, for she’s a gem while I am but a stone. And see how patiently this goddess waits. She has her pick of any suitor. . . yet she’s chosen me and waits for me alone!
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Babcock Avatar
May 14, 2014 at 10:34 PM
A romantic sonnet. Nicely done. I am so behind in reading and commenting. The flu knocked me for 2 months and just getting back on my feet. No energy what so ever. first week that i was able to go out shopping and not be totally exhausted. love phyl
Rico Jones Avatar
March 7, 2014 at 11:49 AM
It is the east and Juliet is the sun! Nice poem and very romantic
Bordner Avatar
March 2, 2014 at 1:21 PM
To turn this Man's stone into shining soul is the most a Man could want from a true love. This absolutely romantic and humbling Andrea. "She is a pearl night stole from the sea..." that's awesome! J.A.B.
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 27, 2014 at 3:50 PM
Wow! A perfect win for you Andrea and so deserving. Your words make the painting come to life. Big Congratulations on your wonderful Win!
A  Avatar
February 26, 2014 at 9:54 PM
A lovely win Andrea, ,. Congratulations:) goodnight ~SKAT~
Ligon Avatar
February 25, 2014 at 4:37 PM
How romantic, Andrea. Thanks for writing about me. ; ) Congrats on your #1 placement.
Seal Avatar
February 21, 2014 at 7:26 PM
Ok Petal, I just glanced down the contests and see I was right about a handful of wins, including this one, congratulations, will get to the others gradually. Take care, Richard
Austin Avatar
February 21, 2014 at 8:47 AM
This would do Romeo proud. LOve, daver
Garg Avatar
February 21, 2014 at 3:31 AM
'she’s a gem while I am but a stone'-- wonderful, ANDREA. Congrats on your another big win..
Gasun Avatar
February 20, 2014 at 8:54 AM
A very lovely poem my dearest friend Andrea. So love it and thoroughly enjoyed reading it this evening. Thank u so much for sharing. Belated congratulations for your top win and the many recent wins! Cheers and biggest hugs to u. Just stopping by for a while at soup before goin to bed. Miss u and your poems. I'll come back soon. Tysm! More blessings! love much and biggest hugs, Leonora
Hamilton Avatar
February 19, 2014 at 3:47 AM
I can see why Isaiah picked this for 1st place it is a write of exquisite beauty and feelings superb pen congrats on 1st place hugs adding to fav's
A. Sharma Avatar
February 18, 2014 at 7:28 AM
This is so creative Andrea! Well done n congrats for top place !!
Kayode Avatar
February 18, 2014 at 5:53 AM
Congrats on the win Andrea,you deserve this.
Davidson Avatar
February 18, 2014 at 4:33 AM
Good one Andrea and well done on this winner. RobertCDxox
Van Akkeren Avatar
February 17, 2014 at 11:54 PM
Congrats Andrea...lovely descriptive poem...loved reading it
May Avatar
February 17, 2014 at 10:21 PM
I love the 4th line...congrats on your big win
Britt Avatar
February 17, 2014 at 9:38 PM
Andrea. A very nice piece. You have given us Romeo's thoughts and impression of fair Juliet before in entrance to this infamous scene. As a counterpoint, my own entry gives Juliet's thoughts and impression AFTER the sweet goodnight. Grats! Chris
Parker Avatar
February 17, 2014 at 6:19 PM
congrats Andrea on your win
Zerbst Avatar
February 17, 2014 at 5:20 PM
Congrats on first place! Very impressive and descriptive. This poem has the power to make me see very clearly what is transpiring. Juliet is also described in detail; she sounds very beautiful :)
Seal Avatar
February 16, 2014 at 3:49 PM
Hiya Petal, I see you more or less followed the story too, Nicely done here though. Take care, Richard
Van Akkeren Avatar
February 15, 2014 at 6:42 PM
Andrea, love the imagery the sunlight lingering in auburn hair, well done cheers Huberta
Williams Avatar
February 14, 2014 at 1:47 PM
Andrea an excellent take on an old theme....David
Maverick Avatar
February 13, 2014 at 6:03 PM
A grreat write on this eternal story Andrea, thank you for leaving comment on my facebook page, good to read you today'
Richards Avatar
February 13, 2014 at 5:28 PM
Spoken with the voice of a suitor in love!! Great piece for the contest, Andrea!!!
Pettit Avatar
February 13, 2014 at 4:14 PM
William Shakespeare is not around today to read this fine write. I'm sure he would be impressed. I am.
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