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September 20, 2025

*Nightjars: medium-sized nocturnal or crepuscular birds. For this poem, they are a symbol of transformation from light to dark, life to death. 


 

Dear Child Of War

Dear child of war,

dust-wearing-wind carries feeble cries in its palm,
settles it near ears that can no longer hear.
Cries arise from hollows of your hungry face,
a pulpit of high cheeks bones— in sharp relief 
to sunken skin-scape sallow and paper thin—
a preacher on the harrows of hunger.

Vulture keeps a still, silent vigil,
a patient witness to your starvation…
comrade and adversary in a fight 
for your last breath and beat.
Your loyal companion, a symbol of death
where drones rain with flames on tents of refugees
and missiles split skies and make shrapnel of the sun,
where dragon-fire-artillery shoots the moon
and shreds stars till they fate-fall
like the last nightjars from nocturne skies. 

Dear child of war,

alone with nothing in your belly but a stone,   
rib bones a famine cage.
Hostage heartbeat condemned behind soul's sternum.

I long to hold you and feed you
honey made of a million wild flowers 
uncrushed beneath metal plates of tank treads.
I yearn to bathe you of collapsed concrete dust 
cleanse you of your mother’s blood,
rattle-boned,  battle-owned, maternal body wrapped 
over yours as they fed her Kalashnikov lead. 

My faraway ache for your plight pales
against your tiny body’s black-rose-throes,
a pawn to thorns of soldiers
piercing pulses on rocket-torn-boot-worn streets.
War-zone fig trees bear no fruit,
hibiscus buds die as hornets knit nests into shrub,
tomorrow but a wheat field laid to waste.

Dear child of war,

blitz-blind world indifferent to your orphan hunger.
Pallbearer-wind carries your cries (crumbled to dust)
elsewhere… I failed you in your final pangs.
     —Eight billion of us 
failed you.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025


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Date: 9/20/2025 12:20:00 PM
Thank you for this touching, non-biased poem that laments the terrible suffering the children must often endure (on either side) due to the greed, lust for power and just plain stupidity of warmongering human leaders. Ugh! Some of the things I've seen written on PS make me just shake my head. This is a winner in any category Susan
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