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Dazzling Dawn

Dazzling Dawn A delicate dew of emerald green awaits the distant dawn A grassy meadow near the ravine, sighting of the first fawn, The yellow birch stretches upward high with a yearly yawn As the yellow-billed loon in its dive upsets the fish’s spawn. The river whispers its watery woes, the sun winks, and wakes The wind walks on tippy toes, before soaking shower shakes, The blossoms bare belting blows as thunder soundly quakes Crickets chirping compose and hush when the dawn breaks. Crimson colors systematically spread like palates in the sky Sunshine spews its daily shed and the valleys valiantly vie, Stillness surrounds ambient air, the willows begin their cry Petals become abloom and aware the eagle floating his fly. The dazzling dawn has woken as King before the dyeing day The panoramic view has spoken as it takes your breath away, And now the dim dusk descends with its paralyzing pallid play For the cycle never ends as long as nature keeps both at bay. July.30.2018 Dusk Or Dawn Sponsored by: Emile Pinet N/A in contest

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Date: 8/1/2018 12:32:00 PM
Hello WW. This entry is lovely with marvelous imagery and the construction and composition are solid poetry. The attached background music truly gives the total package for peace and tranquility which I consider to be a gift. Thank you for sharing and may this day find you well.
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Date: 8/1/2018 2:13:00 AM
I like the aesthetic twists
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Date: 7/31/2018 9:44:00 PM
And nature can do a fabulous job keeping them at bay...A freedom write...Like a cool breeze...All the best WW
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Date: 7/31/2018 7:04:00 AM
I love this, WW! Love everything about it...Best of luck in the contest. Deserving of a win for sure...Stay well my friend...Charlie
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Date: 7/31/2018 6:52:00 AM
Beautiful dawn you painted WW..best for a win.
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