Days of Autumn

An argentine sky adorns the woodlands
In a misty shroud as only slight remnants
Of a long forgotten path remain,
Embraced by the beauty of maples and by
The scent of cool crisp air--autumn permeates.

Yet there is subtle warmth in the mélange 
Of colorful pumpkin, gold and, vermilion leaves,
In their swirling harmonic dance
As they depart the boughs of their birth
Unified in death, as in life.

©2011 Connie Marcum Wong

*For Russell Sivey’s Autumn Splendor contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Austin Avatar
December 1, 2014 at 6:14 PM
Get a chilly autumn shiver from this mystic piece and that's good. Love, daver
Neels Avatar
December 1, 2014 at 7:23 AM
Connie, this is such a joy to read, lovely imagery as well. Congratulations on this gem being featured this week xx
Brown Avatar
September 20, 2012 at 10:23 AM
Congratulations on your very well deserved win in Russell's "Autumn Splendor" contest Connie. Love, Carol
A  Avatar
September 17, 2012 at 7:05 AM
CONNIE Congrats with your win ~SKAT
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
September 17, 2012 at 6:19 AM
Congrats Connie, I am finding it difficult to catch up after being without connection xx
Sweetheart Avatar
September 16, 2012 at 3:29 PM
CONGRATS CONNIE ON ANOTHER FABULOUS WRITE AND WIN MY FRIEND .. LOVELY VISUALS ..LUV TO U
Dietrich Avatar
September 16, 2012 at 9:55 AM
Connie, this one SO deserves to be on the winners' list. You shine with poems like this. Congrats on your win.
A   Avatar
September 15, 2012 at 11:43 PM
Hi Connie.. congratulations with your awesome imagery in Russell Sivey's " Autumn Splendor " beautiful contest. Always nice to support all contest when possible~ Good night :-* PD
Puddifoot Avatar
September 15, 2012 at 3:34 PM
congrats on your win in the contest; very autumnal, with some nice, colourful images; I particularly like the last two lines...and thanks for your kind comments on my work :-)
Johnson Avatar
September 15, 2012 at 2:02 PM
I have been reading from the top. This is my favorite of all so far. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
Williams Avatar
November 26, 2011 at 1:09 AM
Connie, congrats on your great win, wonderful imagery, nice flow..David
Delacroix Avatar
October 27, 2011 at 7:55 PM
Very well written, Connis, with wonderful imagery. Thanks for sharing. Caroline.
A   Avatar
October 15, 2011 at 8:00 PM
Love the images,, Connie, i wish this image was found here in Texas,,, it is just plain hot here, and to have pumpkins outside is murder... and you are so right, with your ending line,,, enjoyed,..p.d.
Wesley Avatar
September 28, 2011 at 7:01 PM
Sounds like the most perfect autumn thata ever was. The last two lines were so unique and exciting to read to wind up your lovely thoughts.
K. Avatar
September 27, 2011 at 2:36 AM
That last line of yours sure ended this perfectly, Connie :) Such beautiful images come to mind as I read this-- and I see you won with this gem-- Congrats to you and hugs :D
Brown Avatar
September 25, 2011 at 3:33 PM
Congratulations on your win in Brian Strand's "Fall Your Choice" contest Connie. Love, Carol
Johnson Avatar
September 24, 2011 at 12:08 AM
Lovely writing connie. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
Dietrich Avatar
September 24, 2011 at 12:02 AM
hi, connie, yeah, I sure hope to finish here soon too! goodnight to ya,my friend. I am dying to see my shows!! Luv,Andrea
Johnson Avatar
September 23, 2011 at 10:42 PM
speak ye from amongst the leaves, Aussie Eucalypts don't throw, keep em for the Koala bears, Sand Goannas just don't know....
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 23, 2011 at 10:50 PM
Love your beautiful country Don. I used to live part time in Sydney. No coat is as soft as a Koala bears.
Merryman Avatar
September 23, 2011 at 9:50 PM
Beautiful imagery. Congrats on 3rd place, Connie! Kim
Dufresne Avatar
September 23, 2011 at 8:37 PM
A beauty Connie. Congratulations to you
Taylor Avatar
September 23, 2011 at 7:17 PM
Congrats on your win, Connie. Excellent write. Nice going. xxxRalph
Guzzi Avatar
September 23, 2011 at 5:08 PM
I love circle of life verses and this is a charming one with new words for me too![argentine sky] congrad's on your win, lovely to hear from you once again! light & love
Dietrich Avatar
September 23, 2011 at 12:34 PM
way to go,Connie. We both made third place. I am so pleased for you with this glorious poem!
Quigley Avatar
September 23, 2011 at 11:06 AM
I love the line "as they depart the boughs of their birth". Well said Connie. Congratulations
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