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Day At the Beach

Sand and surf of Oahu. Boogie boards and kids. Feeling breathlessly safe. Surrounded by friends - strangers-in-arms safe. Elsewhere in time and space the beaches of Normandy tell a different tale. Holding their breaths - will they see mamas and papas, siblings and lovers. Bullet-showers, thundering bolts, staggering heartbeats. Elsewhere in time and space, burning barnacles, Sunday pages without comics, surreptitious plans made active. Duty calls, Arizona sinks, descent to hell with the scent of flesh. It is no day at the beach, as each one serving the armed forces travels to their various destinations of explosions, ripped apart dreams. We feel safe with strangers-in-arms - not strangers to those who’ve served. First we visit the tombs, then the wounded… we remember…remember…never forget; let’s not forget those who’ve given it all even the ones who fought the day the towers fell…likewise, that was hell. Memorial Day, will we care? Do we value… do we love…do we remember why we are free…do we carelessly handle our days…do we remember to thank God? Salute the returning soldiers whether in box or war-worn or serving in any capacity. Thank a soldier for serving, for their bravery, for serving, for living, for dying - tearfully thankful - even willing to suffer and die in their place…to place yourself in their place…we go on because they go on - as in the show must go on. Do you dare step on the stage with those who engage and ring the bell of freedom? 5/29/2023

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Date: 5/30/2023 3:05:00 AM
Normandy brings on so many dead people who died of heroism. A great tribute.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/30/2023 5:28:00 AM
Thank you, Victor! Heroes not by choice. God bless them.
Date: 5/29/2023 6:31:00 PM
Eloquent and much needed-reminder of those who sacrificed so much -- while we frolic in Oahu. Kim, let us stand strong for freedom and the highest values.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/29/2023 8:37:00 PM
Thank you ~
Date: 5/29/2023 5:59:00 PM
wow, this is an amazing tribute to our service people . Thanks for the memorial, Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/29/2023 6:06:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea! xx
Date: 5/29/2023 11:24:00 AM
Well Kim..You cover much here, I am no fan of War I never buy poppies I dont want to engage In raising its profile, at the same time I am Saddend at the deaths of those who went out To protect others, when young i was more Supportive of war in a just cause yet owing to Some divine appointnents I had no idea they Were such at the time.' I salute the bravery yet Abhor the waste of life and misguidance that Led to it.' A strong subject that gets my thought & response.'
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/29/2023 12:25:00 PM
Thank you for your response! Yes, war is a travesty we’d rather not invest in. But the investment made has kept us free. It is such an oxymoron…somehow not right and yet the hero is to be celebrated not berated. God bless!
Date: 5/29/2023 9:03:00 AM
A great tribute to those who have sacrificed their precious lives at the altar of freedom and who go to the battle to let us live free, risking their lives. We have to be thankful to them, also to our Lord, the Almighty ! Lovely poem dear Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/29/2023 12:26:00 PM
Thank you kindly, Valsa!
Date: 5/29/2023 8:17:00 AM
With courage and bravery so many served. I admire those who did and do, not knowing if I have the same strength to do as they have. An honor to those who did, Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/29/2023 12:27:00 PM
Yes, we don’t know if we have what it takes. God bless them!

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