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Dawn's Colored Veil

I feel the deep breath that waits for soft dawn
With eyes towards the twilight of morning's rise
They lay in comfort as a nurtured fawn
And welcome mists of light from night's demise
Purple skies of dawn come with a warning
Sailor's call changing red before a storm
Lucid raindrops fall from clouds adorning
For this day of beauty, I will not mourn
Chasm of sky and I will merge as one
To find joy in another day of breath
I'll fly with soulful wings beneath the sun
And live a peaceful life before my death
Each dawn the sunrise wears a colored veil
To my spirit, this is the Holy Grail


2/14/18 contest Sunrise and Sunset

note...sailor's warning
red at night sailor's delight
red in the morning, sailor take warning
purple turns red before the dawn
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Gauthier Avatar
April 9, 2018 at 2:59 PM
Beautiful. Congrats on your win, Frederic.
Ashley Avatar
February 19, 2018 at 7:54 PM
Such beauty and meaning in your graceful sonnet Frederic. Congratulations on your fine win. ~Susan
Leiser Avatar
February 18, 2018 at 4:34 PM
Congrats on your win, Frederic :)
One Avatar
February 18, 2018 at 12:26 PM
A well written sonnet Frederic.. congratulations on your placement in the contest..
Andresen Avatar
February 18, 2018 at 11:53 AM
- A piece of art from nature and your pen, Frederic ... Congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Wigley Avatar
February 18, 2018 at 1:09 AM
As sonnets go, this is bang-on, Frederic. Excellent. Regards, Viv
Onclaud Avatar
February 16, 2018 at 12:51 PM
i have no words, frederick...incredible portrait of morn... huggs
Parveen Avatar
February 15, 2018 at 12:18 PM
Hi Frederic, wow, that took my breath away:)
Gauthier Avatar
February 14, 2018 at 4:41 PM
Lovely, Frederic. I really enjoyed reading this gem. I really love how much meaning you managed to bring to this short poem.
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