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Dawning Poetic Dreams

I'm an enlightened equinox, strolling in faded universe, dreaming poetry in susurrus serenades of rustling ruby-leaves which whisper cool beamish hues to my autumnal- quartz heart, when the nucleus of unborn flowers, wishes for a meditative musing amidst this mocha season of transforming dialects. But, why do I ricochet as a metallic sonder in this diamond decade, is today's forlorn fall a resurfacing darkness that's restricting my dewy palms from bleeding claret streaks of emotional efflorescence? What if this woollen russet-scarf is an emerald seraphine noose for my smoked existence? I dream of poetry as a maple moonbow, where, I'm the glare of ageless stardust, scattering mulberry mizzle of healing hymns and splashing rose-gold mists across those pastel phosphenes of fated dolence; trying to unlock time's ebony chambers, sequined with ebbulient gems. But, only if every mercuric wing of heaven were as distilled as the brightest loyal feather of liquefied light, would I still find myself erasing own name from the galactic ruins, written as a nebulous naivety of victimised hearts? I dream of poetry, as a bioluminescent throne bejeweled with aqua-florets, floating on cyan tides like a cream-blue pearl, swinging in sun-struck embrace as tuscan rays kiss the lustre of sea-green marmoris. Albeit my wails, O hibernated watercolours, why did you leave the cashmere canvas of my dreary jungles and blanket me in butterfly-stars of lemon-yesteryears, where my intuition echoes beneath the opal anthem of sakura-metaphors, spiralling in silence of sea-maiden's soul? I wonder if, I'm an earthling ash, planting flowers as irenic trouvailles across maroon meadows, when skeletal skies sail in the onyx omen of scattered fossils, above my calligraphic dreams of graceful poesy and juxtaposition of life stares like a blood-cloaked scarecrow, below peridot seas. Perhaps, smiles of bougainvillea too have plastered symphonies and broken secrets, which they exhale in their final rufescent rupture. I'm just a lonely sequoia tree, draped in honeysuckle hiatus, having no fervent faith as my dulcet ozone has depleted into granules of grieving gulfs, and I have clasped hollow hues of helium in the labyrinth of shallow lungs, so that teal thistles don't gravitate me into the eclipsed casket, dividing divine intervention within fractions of fractured dawns.

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Date: 12/31/2023 11:40:00 PM
Congrats. Thanks for sharing this. Joyous New year to you and your family. God bless you.
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Date: 12/31/2023 6:10:00 PM
Dear Hiya, your exquisite poem overflows with delectable alliterations, metaphors and imageries that excite my imagination "susurrus serenades"..so soft and lush.. and "Albeit my wails,/O hibernated watercolours,/why did you leave/the cashmere canvas/of my dreary jungles"..be still my heart! That whole stanza is a big WOW! Yet, every verse throughout is a sparkling gem of scintillant artistry and rich emotion! Your golden pen radiates with your poetic gift. Congratulations for your excellent win in Brian's contest. Warmest wishes, my friend, for a happy new year filled with light, peace and poetic inspiration.. ~Susan
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Date: 12/31/2023 1:15:00 PM
Back to congratulate you on your placement in the contest..
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Date: 12/6/2023 6:50:00 AM
An amazing poem for the contest, it is full of great verses and poetic techniques. I am surprised I did not comment on this one already.. You are a great addition to this site and this is a great choice for this contest.. Congratulations on having your poem showcased..
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Date: 9/12/2023 3:09:00 AM
Your words although are pretty and glamorous, with such shimmering and gorgeous metaphors, truly has an evocative touch and is soulful and artistic. Such a profound write and your descriptive language and the way you express n describe emotions is truly impeccable: i especially loved how you questioned here, made me feel so much as i read. You really nailed it for this one, you kno wat exactly love. Artistic and moving is your poem! Thank you for writing. CONGRATULATIONS.
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Date: 9/11/2023 4:25:00 AM
Just a graceful poesy! A waterfall of rapture! I tried hard to find in my poetic glossary a flow of words worthy of your so awesome "I Dream Poetry"! No words of mine would be adept enough to meet the powerful Beauty of your whole work of Art and heart! Dear Hiya, so much elated to read so heart shaking, so breath taking a poem on I Dream Poetry! I hold so close in my heart every single word of diamond of yours! God bless your so gifted quill and sensitivity! Deepest regards.
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Date: 9/10/2023 6:11:00 PM
Hiya, To travel through space and time with you is a gift. The ornate and mystical emotions, questions and imagery linger far after the poem concludes. It beckons one to read again and then again. Thank you for this imagination and heart and soul you have displayed ! Wonderful ..powerful..poignant and moving. Hugs, Susan :)
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Date: 9/10/2023 11:16:00 AM
Hiya, I love that you question yourself and search for answers in a stream of consciousness filled with colorful imagery and metaphors. The usual and unusual brilliance you display, just lovely and soulful, and a tinge on the dark side. Enjoyed! ~Anaya
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Date: 9/10/2023 6:58:00 AM
An absolutely outstanding write, Hiya!
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Date: 9/8/2023 7:06:00 AM
Hiya, Your writing bursts forth with explosive and striking metaphors, adding a touch of grandeur to your composition. The sheer magnificence of your dreams portrayed in this poem is irresistibly alluring, beckoning one to imagine experiencing such beauty and wonder. Your poem stands as a triumphant tribute to the power of imagination and creative expression. Your words cascade like a torrential waterfall, brimming with vibrancy and energy, leaving a lasting impact on the reader's soul.
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Date: 9/8/2023 3:33:00 AM
This just flows so divinely, Hiya, brilliance captured in words, glowing poetry:)
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Date: 9/7/2023 9:18:00 PM
Hiya this is extremely beautiful and I'm still fascinated with this stunning thought provoking emotional title. Your words flowing like an overflowing waterfall of vibrancy “dreaming poetry in susurrus serenades of rustling ruby leaves” your rich words has always got my eyes sparkling, pulling me closer to feel your phrases. So, what exactly do I like about this poem? It's hard to decipher the best line to recall and admire, because this truly is a work of modern art with words. “nucleus of unborn flowers” the way you capture the raw energy of a metaphor has got me thinking I need to dig a little deeper into my explanations. Beautiful
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Date: 9/7/2023 1:46:00 PM
My good friend, this one is top class and quite intriguing! Definitely a masterpiece that titillates the senses. Brilliant closing-- "" in the labyrinth of shallow lungs, so that teal thistles don't gravitate me into the eclipsed casket dividing divine intervention within fractions of fractured dawns."" A fav... God bless.
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Date: 9/7/2023 1:47:00 PM
And this floored me---"" I wonder if, I'm an earthling ash, planting flowers as irenic trouvailles across maroon meadows when skeletal skies sail in onyx omen of scattered fossils, "" God bless you..
Date: 9/7/2023 11:06:00 AM
A gorgeous kaleidoscope of ever changing colors wrapped up in a brilliant ribbon, Hiya! I love your masterful use of color to highlight each line. There are countless, unique images that carry this beautifully crafted, elegant poem that tells of life's ambivalence - challenges and joys. You truly have a poetic heart. Blessings to you!
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Hiya Sharma
Date: 9/12/2023 4:52:00 AM
Awh, this is such a kind feedback for my poem..truly heartwarming and as poetic as your beautiful writes. I'm wholeheartedly grateful for your kindness and wonderful support always, & I'm really glad that you enjoy reading my poems, thank you so much :)
Date: 9/7/2023 10:36:00 AM
Nice poetic dreams. A classic poem.
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Hiya Sharma
Date: 9/11/2023 10:06:00 PM
Thank you so much for your kind feedback, I'm very grateful for your visit here :)
Date: 9/7/2023 7:21:00 AM
- Beautiful with angel sprinkles and incredible colors in your dream, Hiya - The wording is fantastic :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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Hiya Sharma
Date: 9/11/2023 10:05:00 PM
Awh, thank you sooo much for your sweet and kind words dear Anne-Lise, I'm beyond grateful for your ethereal support, means so much :)
Date: 9/7/2023 5:54:00 AM
Very descriptive and highly expective dreams you have penned in this one. If for a contest, it reads like a good contender. Thanks for sharing and for the visit to my page. Sara
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Hiya Sharma
Date: 9/11/2023 9:19:00 PM
Thank you so much for your gorgeous words of appreciation dear Sara, yes, this is for the contest 'I dream poetry' by Ink Empress. I'm so glad that you enjoyed reading this, sending love :)
Date: 9/7/2023 5:10:00 AM
Reminiscing in wonderful realms of poetry, Hiya. A thrilling ride on your ornate words-- a poetic treat that hypnotizes the reader. Brilliant as always.
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Hiya Sharma
Date: 9/11/2023 9:16:00 PM
Thank you so much for your heartwarming feedback of my poem, I'm beyond grateful for such beautiful words and i truly appreciate your kind support :)
Date: 9/7/2023 4:35:00 AM
"I dream of poetry, as a bioluminescent throne bejeweled with aqua-florets, floating on cyan tides like a cream-blue pearl, swinging in sun-struck embrace as tuscan rays kiss the lustre of sea-green marmoris. " I stay dumbfounded before your poetic ebullience. All I can do is repeat over and again that poetry nests in your heart and thoughts and you are a master poet.... unrivalled and with a few on par!
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Hiya Sharma
Date: 9/11/2023 9:14:00 PM
My gosh, thank you so much for your extremely kind and sweet compliments dear beautiful poetess. Receiving such gorgeous words of honour from such a brilliant soul like you, is definitely a treasure. You always bless my day with your generosity and kindness :)
Date: 9/7/2023 4:22:00 AM
oh wow there are n words for this, your talent is stupendous dear girl !
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Hiya Sharma
Date: 9/9/2023 7:25:00 AM
Thank you so much dear Mystic Rose, your beautiful words are so heartwarming, I appreciate your kind support :)
Date: 9/7/2023 3:52:00 AM
Aw so descriptive and so eloquent a write dear Hiya. A verse that flows well gleaming with the beauty of alliteration, images so vivid... specially the stanza that describes bioluminescent throne, and your vocabulary... some words I really had to search in dictionary... and the title ..so brilliant. Thank you for your visit to my page. Best wishes and Hugs... ~ Ani
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Hiya Sharma
Date: 9/9/2023 6:15:00 AM
Awh, dear beautiful soul, thank you so much for visiting my page and blessing my poem with your ethereal words of kindness.. I'm beyond happy that you liked reading this one and receiving such love from a talented and gifted poetess like you- definitely precious :)
Date: 9/7/2023 1:03:00 AM
An explosion or metaphoric phrases. The splendor of your dreams is tantalizing Hiya. I sure wish I could have dreams like that ! Your poem is triumphant. Well done.
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Hiya Sharma
Date: 9/9/2023 5:45:00 AM
Oh wow, dear SV, thank you so much for making my heart smile with such beautiful and appreciative words, I'm beyond grateful for your kind support.. Always :) sending so much love- Hiya

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