Dawn of New Hope

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we are stepping out of darkness in to a new dawn.Stifling, unclean, blinding and hurtful darkness it was. Voices still linger and ring in our hearts of people who shall speak no more. Let us remember them with respect and love and let us move on. Dark days of the pandemic are coming to an end, new hope beckons! cast the skin off past let their love in our hearts last welcome hope anew There is much to be learnt from yearly seasons. Does a tree mourn the leaves lost during autumn? does the garden mourn the flowers that have wilted. See how they all bounce back with the advent of spring and fill our lives with new freshness. It is time for us all to create a brighter more hopeful future. Let us cheer the new dawn! lilting brook flows fresh buds, leaves, dress new plants again, let time heal the pain 1st Placement Written 01 April 2021 Moments of reflection Haibun poetry contest Malabika Ray Chaudhury sponsored 77 syllables 5,7,5 haiku, 77 syllables 5,7,5 syllables!

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 5/12/2021 11:02:00 AM

What wonderful vision, Krish. Yours is a challenge to acknowledge the sorrow of the pandemic, never forget it's lessons yet continue to put one foot in front of the either walking with a companion named hope into new days birthing each morning. Well done! Congratulations and blessings of new dawns to you!

Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 5/14/2021 11:05:00 AM

Thanks Sam! Yes, Never thought I would see such a thing in my career! Exhausting, scary and people who say it is a hoax- surprise, shock and bemuse me! Thanks for your wonderful comments!

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 5/11/2021 4:39:00 PM

Congratulations on your top win. BW ~ Mala

Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 5/11/2021 9:09:00 PM

Thanks Mala!! Delighted, honoured!!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 4/1/2021 12:15:00 PM

I’m looking forward to the pandemic being a thing of the past. It has created much pain and suffering for many people. I like your positivity in this piece. Blessings and thanks for your visit.

Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 4/1/2021 12:17:00 PM

Thanks Rick! Yes, good days are ahead, We seeing the tail of the monster!!