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Dawn

Faint stars begin to vanish when Dawn appears. She comes to vanquish the dark night. Slowly she comes creeping from beneath the horizon, scattering reflections of sunrise yet to come. At sea, the sailor can distinguish land as Dawn prepares to let the sun be seen in a sky the hue of ocean blue! As Morning’s Twilight shyly shows herself, clouds populate skies in apricot or saffron streaks. Sun peeks over the horizon; Dawn is done! Aug. 18, for the Word Vision Poetry Iii Poetry Contest of Vermillion Scythe

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Date: 8/13/2020 4:50:00 PM
I'm guessing this is the Dawn poem you were referring to in your comment today? It's very lovely, another free verse gem from your talented pen.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 8/13/2020 6:13:00 PM
wow, I forgot all about this one. I guess I write about dawn a lot. I was thinking of the sonnet I wrote about dawn. Can't even think of its name but think you have seen it!
Date: 8/4/2019 5:38:00 PM
A very beautiful write Andrea, I got an NA for this contest (All of my last 4), oh well.
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Date: 10/4/2018 1:48:00 PM
Congratulations on this beauty Andrea, at the top of the list! : )
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Date: 10/3/2018 6:42:00 PM
On top again. Well done, Andrea. Congrats. I love the sounds of "dawn is done"
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Date: 10/3/2018 7:20:00 AM
Congratulations Andrea : Dawn my favorite time of day. You capture it in a magical way. Luv, SuZ
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Date: 10/3/2018 6:16:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Andrea.
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Date: 10/2/2018 9:06:00 AM
Congrats on your win Andrea
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Date: 9/23/2018 4:54:00 PM
Andrea, this is so pretty, I could see it in my mind, do enter this in another contest one day sure to be a winner, it is too me!
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 9/23/2018 8:57:00 PM
thanks so much, dear. I want to go see your N/A also but did not have time earlier today.
Date: 8/21/2018 2:05:00 PM
Such interesting food for thought. Dawn, first light, comes to vanquish darkness, at which moment, Dawn is gone! Lovely verse, Andrea. Blessings, Gershon
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Date: 8/20/2018 3:32:00 PM
You find the beauty in the world on the outside, I find it on the inside of ourselves.
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Date: 8/18/2018 6:07:00 PM
Dawn is always enchanting Andrea. I got this contest mixed up with another one and I thought you wpn this already! : )
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Date: 8/18/2018 4:50:00 PM
Great imagery..well done, Andrea.
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Date: 8/18/2018 4:50:00 PM
Nice imagery...as dawn leaves a kiss of dew...All the best Andrea
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Date: 8/18/2018 3:27:00 PM
Lovely Andrea, best wishes...
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Date: 8/18/2018 10:55:00 AM
I can visualize this beauty ...this early morn..Twilight slowly showing herself ...Serenity at its best is felt and a magical wonder seen.
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Date: 8/18/2018 10:30:00 AM
oh, this is beautiful, my friend
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