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Dasher and Dancer's Christmas Eve Call Offs

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Written, December 12, 2024
For The Contest, “Christmas Tizzy”
Sponsor, Miranda Hawley

Dasher and Dancer yelled midair and said to Santa, “We can't fly! Earth satellites have made a snare of wireless currents in the sky!” Then Santa answered, “Use plan B- come down one level in the sky. Take care and watch! Don't hit a tree or steeple top as we zoom by!” So they both did as Santa said, though still, they'd be a little late; made headway now with deer and sled where techno-waves had low-flow rate!

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Date: 1/18/2025 4:01:00 PM
Don't hit that tree. I am sure that would be traumatic for the reindeer and Santa. Congratulations to you for your Honorable Mention in my contest.
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Date: 1/12/2025 7:22:00 AM
This is great! I love it! Xo
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