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Darned Drive-In

Busty Betty beguiled the besotted boys Painfully plain Polly puzzled over her plight Dapper Dan discovered the delights of drive-ins Blushing busty Betty before long began to bulge Polly perceived her problem and preceded To point the poor papa and his problem to the priest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 9/13/2011 9:17:00 PM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of John, Barbara
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Date: 9/12/2011 11:38:00 PM
soo cute...things do happen a lot in a drive-in, barbara...loads of smiling cheers to you for the amazing award!! :) huggs
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Date: 9/12/2011 7:47:00 PM
Big tattle tale...Congrats on your win..Sara
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Date: 9/12/2011 6:21:00 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful win!!!!!!!!-------Lori
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Date: 9/12/2011 1:33:00 PM
Barbara, Thanks for the honor of reading your "Darned Drive-In ", I was honored by your worthy poetry. Congratulations on your third place. Agape, Moses
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Date: 9/12/2011 12:31:00 PM
Enjoyed this! Congrats on your win, Barbara! Kim
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Date: 9/12/2011 8:39:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Moses' "Alliteration Poem Please" contest Barbara. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/12/2011 4:07:00 AM
hey Barbara congrats on your win, loved it..David
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Date: 9/12/2011 1:41:00 AM
Great work Barbara. Congratulations. Joyce
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Date: 9/12/2011 1:17:00 AM
Congrats BG on sweet success with this great Alliteration poetry luv..
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Date: 9/12/2011 12:31:00 AM
A 3rd place congratulations Barbara for your placement in John Freeman's Alliteration Poems Please contest. CR
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Date: 9/11/2011 11:12:00 PM
My Dear Barbara, Congratulations on YOUR win in Moses' " Contest "Alliteration POEMS Please" Quite Clever I thought YOU said YOU were not in the Mood to Write This is Superb With LOVE, ALWAYS and FOREVER YOURS...Harry
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Date: 9/9/2011 2:04:00 AM
This is why a DANGER SIGN needs to be on all drive in admission tickets. ha ha. Barbara..just pure fun. Great alliteration...fun entry. Mine,..a lil serious. Best to u, Gwendolen
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Date: 9/6/2011 10:49:00 PM
hahaha, I had to think a bit and then it hit me. VERY good!!!
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