Darling

My eye was attracted by your green eyes first coaxing within me seduction's prize as desire multiplied my passion's sighs metamorphosed into affection's cries Inspired by Matt's contest

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Tina Lasley

Date: 2/15/2010 6:21:00 PM

Awwwww! So sweet!!! What a heart you have.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/24/2010 4:38:00 AM

Sounds like winner's circle writing. Good luck in the contest. Keep the romantic pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work. Sara

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 1/23/2010 5:03:00 PM

this is different than most of your work and just as lovely. Lucky woman, your wife. I do so admire you my friend. BG

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 1/23/2010 5:03:00 PM

this is different than most of your work and just as lovely. Lucky woman, your wife. I do so admire you my friend. BG

P Sheart

Date: 1/23/2010 2:27:00 PM

A lovely tribute to your wife Brian. Love Light Patty

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/23/2010 10:50:00 AM

Wonderful entry for Matt's contest and good luck ..its a gem... thankxxx for the challenging Poetry of the Noun contest.. u did a superb job in selecting the winning poems and I am very appreciative of having been able to participate.. am presently working on your new A Rondel contest entry... congrats to all the winners... blessings.. luv.. Linda-Marie..

Lena Townsend

Date: 1/23/2010 9:00:00 AM

Reading your work is almost intimidating; each piece is so skillfully written and filled with so much meaning in just a few words. You are an exceptional poet. You and your wife must have such a passionate relationship. You are truly blessed to have each other. Smiles from Lolita