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....Darkness Falls....

Do you really think, that I am going to trade my eternal soul, for your bowl of germ infested puke? Think again! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ O' sullen sullies of darkness.... How you often paint yourself so very innocent and pretty While you drool at the corners of the edges of jagged Within your ever deceiving, and your taintedly twisted smile and corroding mouth Galloping around as if you were some fortitude of light and wisdom? Amid these pretentious comforts, cast, from within a hollowed and daggered heart Just as long, as you can capture everyone else, within your chains of bindings Bound, unto your own darkened perspectives, beneath, your clinching claw sharpened grasp.... Eructing your molten lavas, spewed, of your gargoylish poisoned vomit Upon the lives of those who are somewhat already blind, themselves? Offering your beguiling and benumbing putrid stench, to alluringly, lure them in Into the depths, of your own black widow webbed horror show.... While pounding upon your chest, as if you were the conqueror of them all? As you leave your trails of excrement and slime, within the dust, of your ever slithering wake These your offerings, before all of Heavens disbelieving and watchful eyes! Unto the unknowing and eternal souls, which you try so desperately, to swallow whole! But your indignities and godlessness, will not escape your forthcoming demise.... For your manglings, disfigured, shall lead unto your own wraths, pending doom.... And yet for now, you do still stand, unscathed, within your wantingly amissful ignorance Projecting unto others, as if you were some sort of mighty tower, in which they, should believe? But knowing deep inside of yourself the truth, of how very feeble and lost, you truly are! Standing in front of this melting mirror, within your plotting poisoned mind.... A flower of the darkest soils, charcoals of crimsons ashes, your burning, and scorching flames Lucifers child, of the neverendings, forever, and endless pain...."You!" ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ....Darkness Falls.... {The final kiss}

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Date: 5/20/2009 3:45:00 PM
beautiful, tragic, truthful, i am in awe. this was powerful with both a light and a dark, fitting my mood at the moment slightly, the images struck out at my mind, it was more like watching than reading this poem. wherever your words your writings come from must be a wondrous place indeed, and im so glad we may share it here. :) as always you amaze us with your words. always such a pleasure to read. with all the love that i have madison
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Date: 4/9/2009 11:12:00 PM
Wow John, this is a powerful write. It so fits my mood and feelings right now concerning my daughters "friend". The conviction in your words. The evil shall fall! Thank yu for your thoughtful comment. I am glad to be back on the site. I missed it. I hope you are well my friend. I picked this passage because they are words to live by (and words I need to hear right now) Romans 12:9-21 Love, Robin GBY
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Date: 2/16/2009 9:16:00 AM
Just me again. I have four novels. The first is about reincarnation; the second is about 4 girls who sail from Maui to Japin, crossing the Devil's Triangle in the Pacific. The third is about my own experiences covering Hurricane Kate as a reporter, and the last one finds two American airline crash victims rediscovering the vestiges of Atlantis. I never submitted any for publication. I just enjoyed the characters' adventures and shared with my friends. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 2/16/2009 9:13:00 AM
John, I'm so glad I read this poem today. A friend whose spouse had committed crimes and perpetrated much mayhem is now divorced. I thought of Randy when I read this poem, especially "indignities and godlessness, will not escape your forthcoming demise." Very POWERFUL writing throughout! Now Randy can pursue criminal charges as the police try to find Ali. I'll tell you about the novels in my next text. I don't know how to use soupmail and I'm running out of space. Carolyn
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Date: 12/3/2008 1:41:00 PM
HI!!!! My world is filled with flowers and LOVE!! I have someone who really cares for me and loves me for who I am. . . You were right, It just takes time for somethin GREAT to come along and find me. . . Thank You for being my inspiration and a father figure that I've never had before. . . Love You Alexandria Raye Matheny!! ^_^
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Date: 12/3/2008 10:37:00 AM
Oh my...I'd surely be terrified if I were that 'you'. This piece feels like a dark smothering cloak, not one that any would wish to wear. There is much anger here, fringed by hate, (perhaps not for the person, but certainly for the situation or circumstances?) You are an enigma, John Rhinem. "Darkness Falls" feels ominous and most frightening. Well penned; dark symbolisms, grotesque imagery..a hopelessly dire picture. I hope you're well, John! Wish the best to you and yours.God bless..luv, Mikki
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Date: 12/3/2008 6:41:00 AM
Hello my very good friend, as usual your work has an effect on the reader, so very beautifully wrote, I thank you for your messages, and would be most pleased to retain and develop our friendship with the passing of time, God Bless and Protect you, Love always, Julie
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Date: 12/2/2008 8:12:00 PM
symbolized it. Take care of yourself. In this festive time, do not let the evil hang upon you. This is a great poem you know. And I will be away for a few days. Will miss the soup a lot. Hope t catch all of you soon. Keep posting but those evergreen romantic writes John:) Again, take good care. Love to you and yours, Chitra
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Date: 12/2/2008 8:10:00 PM
Hi John, I can feel some sort of disappointment you maybe going through. This is just above me:) A pure paradise, I say. Great choice of words and the presence of God and holy spirit was there everywhere. Everytime I read it, it gives me more. Evil is certainly like that, but with him the key point is that- never fear the evil, its him who should fear you, coz God dwells inside you and God can so blindly kill that little evil. Something is bothering you? Oh, cheer up John. Your last writes too
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Date: 12/2/2008 1:57:00 PM
I LOVE IT!!!! It shows everything there is to be dark to depressingly AWESOME!!!!!! Great Work!! Love Your Friend Alexz ^.^
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Date: 12/2/2008 2:46:00 AM
this is a good write, the enemy is full of darkness, we are truly blessed to be in the light, thanks for your feed back on the lord is my sheperd, my kids so argue with each other just like any siblins but with God it helps them to try hard not to hurt each other by saying names to each other, they are growing strong in faith bur we all have our off days but when we get down it's great that the lord is there to pick us back up and to keep guiding us, the faithful shepherd, God bless you.
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Date: 12/2/2008 2:42:00 AM
Extremely dramatic and powerful with a dark ambiance, dear John. Elaine
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Date: 12/1/2008 11:26:00 PM
wow,sounds like mother explaining my pop when they were together yaers ago, look this poem really hit the interesting scale with me, thank for sharing.
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Date: 12/1/2008 4:47:00 PM
This is so dark and twisted and painful at times to read. I loved the line "standing in front of the melting mirror, within your own mind" very powerful John,,,,Laurie
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Date: 12/1/2008 3:46:00 PM
always. Your truths are mine Your l ove for Christ and walk are true. You have my email address and I am there for you if you need me. I just feel someone upset you. That bothers me John. You are a decent loving christian and I will stand by you and defend you as a Loving brother in Christ you have my 100 percent support. God bless you my brother . MichaelTorres
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Date: 12/1/2008 3:42:00 PM
John this is so powerful. Who ever this is they need lot's of prayer and correction. You are so gifted in knowing your words are from your heart and your God (JESUS) given truth's. John I pray for this individual God does not want not one to perish. I feel your heart and I pray for you not tobe hurt if this is refective of anyone that has terribly dissapointed you. I know you are a fair and loving gentlemen to saqy the very least . I love you my brother and If I can do anything Im here for you
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Date: 12/1/2008 11:43:00 AM
Great poem, you generate good concepts and develope well penned poems...Raul
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Date: 12/1/2008 11:37:00 AM
Very deep, you used very strong words, wonderful write my friend! :) ~Michaela~
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Date: 12/1/2008 10:37:00 AM
Sounds like you're pretty peeved with the likes of this one. Pretty straight forward with some matter-a-fact phrasing. I like it!
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