Notes About The Poem

Dark Parts

Some parts of this city I should not go
too few streetlamps dampened, wobbly wet walls.
These are those parts that one ought not to know
perfect settings where dark danger befalls.

My mind has morphed the city I knew
quickens my pace from sly shadows behind.
Now meeting people who I stare straight through
turning corners to streets I cannot find.

Not belonging here only feeds my fear
searching for a near nook, safe place to be.
Far from silent steps behind me I hear
striving eyes dart, hoping no one shall see.

Tell me why, did I, venture out this day
prime pulses pounding, one hastens away.



 Colored Pencil Illustration by G. Gaul

8/26/21
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Goldsmith Avatar
March 2, 2025 at 9:09 AM
Congratulations on your win. Your "Dark Parts" is a wonderful write and picture/Colored Pencil. Love your artwork... Have a blessed day with your win................
mysore Avatar
March 2, 2025 at 4:32 AM
beautiful illustration dear poet. thoughtful write, congratulations on your win. cheers!!!
Jones Avatar
March 2, 2025 at 2:26 AM
Greg your art is amazing and your poem is great! Congratulations on your top win!
Hawley Avatar
March 1, 2025 at 9:19 PM
The picture of your poem is correct for what you have wrote. I live in a big*ish city and after a certain time I make sure I have my husband with me for certain parts of the city, meaning I can relate to this very well. Congratulations on your win in my contest.
Lane Avatar
November 25, 2023 at 9:00 AM
Congrats on this one, Greg.
Lane Avatar
November 27, 2023 at 7:17 AM
Thank you for such nice compliments.
Gaul Avatar
November 27, 2023 at 7:01 AM
Thanks for your comment Lin. I was impressed with your entry and the fear it expressed. Congratulations on your high placement.
Peck Avatar
September 23, 2021 at 9:07 AM
"...turning corners to streets I cannot find..." is a beautiful phrase, poignant in its truth of so many ways. I love your poem!
Gaul Avatar
September 23, 2021 at 12:20 PM
So funny you picked that line, another fine poet said the same thing. Thanks ever so for your comment and visit.
Miers Avatar
September 9, 2021 at 4:01 PM
shadows and blind corners. really cool song
Gaul Avatar
September 9, 2021 at 6:27 PM
Very insightful commentary Michael. Thank you for your visit.
La France Avatar
September 2, 2021 at 2:56 PM
Greg, wonderful and congratulations on your win in my contest ~ peace and tranquility _ Constance
Gaul Avatar
September 3, 2021 at 5:56 AM
Constance, appreciate the placement and your hosting is invaluable to PS.
Alex Avatar
August 26, 2021 at 10:41 PM
A very beautiful sonnet. Congratulations on your win!
Gaul Avatar
August 27, 2021 at 5:52 AM
Your loyal visits and support are most appreciated.
De Beaulieu Avatar
August 26, 2021 at 1:13 PM
Hello Greg Gaul, I would never venture out in dark laces. My inner voice would tell me not to.There could be danger there Better to be safe than sorry. Hugs..
De Beaulieu Avatar
August 27, 2021 at 10:40 AM
Hello Greg, u donot venture out in the darkness unknown. It would be dangerous. You are welcome my friend. Hugs.
Gaul Avatar
August 27, 2021 at 5:53 AM
Darlene, I very much appreciate your positive support and frequent visits. It helps.
Kauffman Avatar
August 26, 2021 at 11:59 AM
Powerful lines Greg - "turning corners to streets I cannot find. The metaphor is striking. Your imagery is chilling "silent steps I hear behind me." Why do we not "venture out" into "dark places" and into the "dark night of the soul?" Really well done! A fav for me.
Gaul Avatar
August 26, 2021 at 2:11 PM
Sam, so glad this piece spoke to you or at least your spiritual sensibilities. Of which, I reckon your sense of soul as notable. This has been a repeating dreamscape of mine, lost in a dark city, not knowing where to turn. Thanks so much for your visit. It's a bit of a lifeline.
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