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09/08/23

 

 

 

 

 

' Darkness follows as shadow does not leave you.' - Poet DARK Dark is love when reciprocation doesn't run parallel. Darker is emotion if got depressed in dismal. Dark is passion when confronted with refusal. Darkness prevails when love is not loyal. Darker is meanness to meet with darkest betrayal. Dark is malice, mostly not visual. Darkest is ingratitude, not unusual. Dark is devil, also terrestrial. Dark dream is nightmare seems surreal. Dark is discrimination subject to racial. Dark is rule of Hitler ! Imperial. Dark examples not rare but in serial. Dark death is final ! Life ends in burial. Darkest is ' After Life ' ! May be Celestial.

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Date: 9/10/2023 11:05:00 PM
Anisha, wonderful writing and congratulations on your win in my contest, I like your quote too, Constance
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Date: 9/10/2023 9:16:00 PM
Each line is very thought-provoking. Congratulations!
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Date: 9/10/2023 8:57:00 AM
Congratulations on your contest win with this great poem, Anisha
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Date: 9/7/2023 8:33:00 AM
“Darkness prevails when love is not loyal” that line stood out for me. Beautiful depictions of Dark , very well Delivered
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Date: 9/7/2023 1:56:00 AM
- Very dark ... but maybe not evil ... great written, Anisha :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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