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Dandelions

Trembling white clouds sway Blown by breeze and playful child Seeds for tomorrow

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/22/2009 12:04:00 PM

Congratulations on being a first round survivor and the best to you in the finals Barbara. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors in 2010 whatever they may be. Love, Carol

Elaine George

Date: 12/21/2009 10:47:00 PM

Dear Barbara, Congratulations on both of your wonderful entries making it through the first round and best wishes on advancing to the finals. Lainie

P Sheart

Date: 12/21/2009 9:03:00 AM

Congrats on your poem winning the first round of PS contest!! Very well deserved, enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry. Here’s wishing you a very Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!! May 2010 be your best year ever! Love Light Patty

Date: 12/20/2009 5:46:00 PM

Good use of imagery. Congratulations on having two haiku make it to the finals. Wishing you the best in the next round. Karen

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 12/20/2009 3:07:00 PM

Loved how you depicted the clouds as "trembling". Wishing you all the best for both your haiku, Barbara :) Congrats for both of it getting through :)

Carrie Richards

Date: 12/20/2009 12:54:00 PM

Two wonderful haikus that made it through the 1st round! How wonderful, Barb...congratulations and best wishes. Happy Holidays! ~ Love, Carrie

James Fraser

Date: 12/20/2009 10:15:00 AM

Many congratulations on reaching the second round with your fine poem Barbara >> James

Chelsea ...

Date: 7/17/2009 3:37:00 PM

Such a little poem but with so much meaning, this is a good poem, I liked it a lot.

Tyesha Ehigiator

Date: 6/8/2009 6:19:00 PM

Lovely haiku, I can see this so clearly... My daughter is alwaying blowing the seeds...She loves it. A month ago our yard was covered in em..I blew a few myself..love the images here..God Bless, Tyesha

Date: 6/6/2009 6:17:00 PM

So much depth in this concise poem. Love the last line. Gives one hope. Thank you for sharing your talent with us. Keep on writing! Karen

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/4/2009 6:04:00 PM

This is lovely, Barbara. Children can find much beauty in dandelions. You have mail. Love, Carolyn

James Fraser

Date: 6/4/2009 2:47:00 PM

Excellent Haiku Barbara, seeds = new life, and is'nt it awesome to see kids blowing Dandelion seeds. A young life encouraging new life, just awesome>James

Christopher Higgins

Date: 6/4/2009 7:43:00 AM

Trembling white clouds...that is freaking awesome..i am stuck on that first line and can't move on..wonderfully done.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 6/3/2009 10:17:00 PM

beautiful-seeds for tomorrow---brilliant haiku--charma