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I had a dream once: That I walked alone Along the other bank of a river: Watched, fascinated, As gentle waters flowed. I saw you dancing by the shore Upon the newly watered grass; How young and lithe you were Pirouetting alone to a lively tune That flared from nowhere. I often ponder whether I should have jumped in and Joined the dance with you. For then I would have wooed you, Lured you into my loving arms. Together we would have wandered, Rambling along the peaceful charms Of life and never fear the dangers That the future planned for us. Instead I hid behind a weeping wisteria, Watched you dance and sing A long and even rhythm, Untiring and full of youthful zeal. I had a dream once. But dreams can come true. I can still see her dancing alone. But now she’s mine, Celebrating our youth and love And kissing beneath the pink flower wisteria. It was a dream come true.

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Date: 4/10/2021 1:23:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your delightful poem, filled with romantic charm, Victor. It takes my breath away, as does the beautiful picture. :D
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Date: 2/27/2021 4:13:00 PM
Victor, that’s so romantic and adorable, dreams really can come true ~~ Belle
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Date: 2/27/2021 12:12:00 AM
Very romantic and sweet Victor, with a happy ending as your dream came true... God bless ~ Ani
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Date: 2/26/2021 10:01:00 PM
I had a dream so relaxed feel, If dreams could come true. Enjoyed reading. Hugs Eve
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Date: 2/25/2021 10:54:00 PM
WoW! Victor, That was such a lovely and romantic dream, with a happy ending.Have wonderful day, my friend:-)Alexis
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Date: 2/25/2021 7:16:00 PM
A beautifully romantic dream that came true...with kindest thoughts Ann xx
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Date: 2/25/2021 3:13:00 PM
What a delightfully romantic piece.
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Date: 2/25/2021 6:51:00 AM
A wonderful rendition of a story well written, of love and possibilities never explored. I love this and the happy ending, dreams do sometimes come true!
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Date: 2/25/2021 6:11:00 AM
To be honest, Victor, your poetry is a dream come true. Truly a lovely pen.
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Date: 2/25/2021 5:57:00 AM
Lovely! In youth we do not oft step into our desires.
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Date: 2/25/2021 5:41:00 AM
Ahh!! Romantic work. Glad your day dream came true. Thanks for the visits to my page. Sara
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Date: 2/25/2021 4:58:00 AM
Dreams that come true are so special---as is this poem. Lovely romantic rendering, Victor, flows like a short movie scene. Enjoyed the read.
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Date: 2/25/2021 2:52:00 AM
Beautiful,romantic story. Loved the happy ending. It made me feel dreams come true. It left me with a happy state of mind. Thanks for sharing. Take care, Rama Loved the pic.
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Date: 2/25/2021 1:32:00 AM
- Life is wonderful when dreams come true, Victor :) - A beautiful and warm poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/25/2021 1:28:00 AM
A very romantic love story Victor, love the happy ending, yes dreams sometimes come true. Tom
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