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Dance With My Words


Dance with my words,
and I'll dance with yours
Let's do a pen pirouette,
lets make some passionate scribbling noise

I'll let you teach me how to move
in perfect iambic meter
Take me through my paces just right,
doing odd cadence swirls
as we play follow the leader

I speak,
you can hear
I heard you dear,
your voice is so clear
Now come close, closer here,
let me whisper in your ear
The things I want to say,
how I do love you ...
you love me too
Dance with me,
just you

I'll dance with your words,
and you'll dance with mine
Let's do a pen tango dip step,
synchronized thoughts forever entwined

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 11/5/2016 4:19:00 PM
These lines belong to a romantic and passionate soul, Freddie! With pen in hand you are able to put words to music and vice versa! You will never fail to have a loving muse close by. #7 Regards // paul
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Date: 11/3/2016 1:38:00 PM
Pen tango, do you dip the ink? :)
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Date: 11/2/2016 3:39:00 PM
This one had me moving my feet, that's for sure. Really nice Freddie.
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Date: 11/2/2016 3:11:00 PM
Just excellent, love your words my friend.
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Date: 11/1/2016 11:19:00 PM
Let it be a great dance ... Let us collect some jingle moments ... for a future trance ... from this nice poem ...
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Freddie Robinson Jr.
Date: 11/2/2016 9:57:00 AM
Ty for the loving words, Probir. I value your comments greatly. Love always to you, friend. RW
Date: 11/1/2016 10:03:00 PM
Just put another dime and the juke box brotha now just waiting for the music to play. Enjoyed the rhyming! Peace!!
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Freddie Robinson Jr.
Date: 11/2/2016 9:56:00 AM
You got that right, Steven. Dance the night away. I am really glad you liked it, it makes me smile. Stay blessed. Love your work as well, bruh. Much love to you. RW
Date: 11/1/2016 10:01:00 PM
This is beautifully penned RW! Nice to see your prolific pen still at work.
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Freddie Robinson Jr.
Date: 11/2/2016 9:54:00 AM
Ty, Rick. I was feeling the groove when I wrote this. It's good to have a musical affinity when writing certain poems. I love your kind words, my friend. Love and peace to you. RW
Date: 11/1/2016 9:38:00 PM
Hi Freddie, I love this! It is so poetic and well written write. You invite your reader to a beautiful dance. May I be the first to say it is a most fascinating dance. I enjoyed the read. A big seven and fav:-) Alexis
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Freddie Robinson Jr.
Date: 11/2/2016 9:50:00 AM
Ty, Alexis. I just like being romantic a lot of times. I appreciate the kind words. Much love to you. RW