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Dance of the Northern Moon

The tribes all gather For the festival of the moon dance Fires lighted, shining into the sky Northern lights off in the distance Snow falls softly As the ritual dance between young lovers Brings memories to all the ancients A Whale died for just such a day Men of honor feed both body and spirit The young learn from the old The old absorb the love from the young The circle of the north lives within us all Fires burn bright in the skies Passions fade onto loves embrace Long into the midnight skies Let us kiss our mothers in thanks We shall kiss theirs for their wisdom Their daughters we shall cherish within our arms For mother earth lets us breath So that we may dance yet once more

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 2/23/2014 8:07:00 PM
Yet again another excellent write....Seren
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Date: 2/16/2014 4:27:00 PM
Hi Arthur, i was intrigued by the title and the poem did not disappoint. It was eerie and beautiful...i wonder is it some special ritual that you describe so well. Cheers Huberta
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 2/16/2014 9:55:00 PM
Very kind of you, thank you so much!!!!
Date: 2/16/2014 3:26:00 AM
I thoroughly enjoyed reading this one Arthur.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 2/16/2014 9:55:00 PM
Thank you again Darren
Date: 2/15/2014 8:49:00 PM
this feels so "old world" so tribal. Very nice!
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 2/15/2014 10:27:00 PM
Thank you for your kind words!!!
Date: 2/14/2014 6:43:00 PM
I like the mood you have created with this piece. One small suggestion, consider a comma after Northern Light. I think it will help with the flow of that line. Overall I would say this is an excellent story well told.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 2/15/2014 10:26:00 PM
Thanks Richards and yes you are correct!!!!
Date: 2/14/2014 8:23:00 AM
I loved this Arthur excellent write but it says that poem link is no longer on here? maybe e-mail me it? hugs
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 2/15/2014 10:26:00 PM
Thank you so much Shadow you are so kind!

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