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Daddy

tension of paint, basic then mixed, browned and at last blackened but an artist can churn a mess into a sunset t.v. magic especially for a sick kid in the sixties home from school with a throbbing forehead taste of bile snotty sheets and a daddy who brings home an ornamental pen simplicity in love rewind the clock but not just yet for i love this man even more today a simple hug a kiss on his head tension lost 11/27/2018

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Date: 11/27/2018 10:17:00 PM
He just knew what you wanted. Great gift anytime. Wonderful.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/27/2018 10:28:00 PM
The comfort of gifts lingers through time! Thank you!
Date: 11/27/2018 4:13:00 PM
This is really awesome, Kim! (I know how trite that sounds, but I mean it!). A stirring, moving tribute! Best wishes, Gershon
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/27/2018 8:48:00 PM
Thanks so much! I appreciate your comments, Gershon!
Date: 11/27/2018 1:04:00 PM
Aw, such a nice memory of your dad talking care of you, like the lines 'for I love this man/even more today'-
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/27/2018 1:05:00 PM
Thank you, Michelle!
Date: 11/27/2018 11:38:00 AM
Throbbing forehead and snotty sheets. I hope this is all behind you, because it is so clear how awful that was. I am glad that you had a nurturing Daddy who knew how to fix you, and rewind your little sick self, Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/27/2018 12:19:00 PM
Something about Dad coming home from work with an offering to make you feel better!
Date: 11/27/2018 8:43:00 AM
A beautiful tribute to dads everywhere my friend. Dads rock! At least that's what my daughter tell me. : )
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/27/2018 8:48:00 AM
They do and I appreciate mine more today then yesterday
Date: 11/27/2018 8:34:00 AM
What a sincere tribute to your Dad. I'm reminded of my Dad likewise... May the Father above keep on blessing our Dads.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/27/2018 8:48:00 AM
Thank you, Beata! :)

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