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Dachshunds

Dachshunds Charming pair of brave dachshunds, Possessive and stubborn, Grew up with my only son, Always jealous of my love for him, Playing games with lot of wit, Full of humour they were a perfect fit, Till a day burglars broke into the house, Defying their skills of suspicion and hunt, Took away one along with them, The other kept digging the garden in search of him, No praise or treats could console, Even the police failed to prove their role, We all died each day with rising passion, Loneliness had turned into obsession, Till the other disappeared too the other day, after turning garden into a heap of clay, Parting was unbearable to our hearts, Teary eyes, grief tore our souls apart, Comical clowns that gave us smiles, Must have found peace or travelled miles, Memories haunt and turn to torrents, Lost are the lively days with Dachshunds ! Written Jan 21st, 2015 For contest "Dachshunds" by Rob carmack Awarded 5th place Now entered for contest "your fav old poem #2" by Shadow Hamilton Awarded 2nd place Entered for "I love my pets" poetry contest by Laura loo Awarded 2nd place win

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Date: 1/31/2016 11:06:00 PM
DR UPMA, Congratulations on your sweet Pet win. XOX ~LINDA~
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Date: 1/28/2016 8:37:00 AM
So sad, Dr. Upma, and I felt sad reading it. Our pets are family members. Sorry for your losses, but happy for your win in the contest. Congratulations. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 1/26/2016 11:54:00 AM
DR UPMA, CONGRATS ON YOUR LOVELY PET WIN. LOVE ** SKAT **
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Date: 1/26/2016 9:13:00 AM
Perfectly done! :) Congratulations. -hans
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Date: 1/26/2016 1:21:00 AM
i have dachshunds too, dr. upma...congrats!..huggs
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Date: 1/25/2016 9:16:00 PM
I know the same grief, Upma. Sorry for the loss but happy for your win in this contest. Well done.
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Date: 1/25/2016 5:40:00 PM
Whata shame, Upma. Outstanding write. Congrats.
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Date: 1/25/2016 3:43:00 PM
Dr. Upma, congrats on your placement in the contest, it was very touching..*smiles* -luloo
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Date: 6/11/2015 4:12:00 PM
:)
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Date: 6/11/2015 8:14:00 AM
This is so sad! I used to have one named Sam. Congratulations on your win Upma.
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Date: 6/10/2015 6:18:00 PM
so sad always to lose a beloved pet how terrible to have one stolen Dr Upma congrats on 2nd place hugs
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Date: 2/1/2015 2:41:00 PM
DR UPMA, CONGRATS on your win ~ SKAT ~
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Date: 1/29/2015 2:36:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Dr Sharma:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/28/2015 12:26:00 PM
Emotive work..If based on truth that was horrible violation of your personal territory.. Congrats on your winningwork. Sara
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Date: 1/27/2015 10:23:00 PM
Dr. Upma, congratulations on your win. I truly am sorry about your loss, as I read below this was a true story. It is so very sad. This happened to our son and his wife years ago when someone stole their beautiful golden Lab dog. They were so attached to him and we mourned for their loss too, so your poem brought back that memory. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 1/27/2015 6:40:00 AM
Sadly, true, there are inhumane people out there. I can't imagine what life will be like when my husband loses Simon. but a normal death has to be better than disappearance. Congrats, Dr. Upma
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Date: 1/27/2015 4:23:00 AM
Congratulations on win Upma. God bless>rajat
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Date: 1/26/2015 9:09:00 PM
Congrats on a fine win..A sad time...BG
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Date: 1/26/2015 4:53:00 PM
Congratulations, Upma! This feels so real; It was such a horrible thing to do stealing somebody's pet! Pets do become part of the family, and I can understand how hearts mourn the loss. #7 // paul
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Date: 1/26/2015 4:29:00 PM
Dr. Upma A. Sharma, when they grow up together as playmates one does tend to mourn the loss of the other they have as much feelings as we do. Congratulations on your win and a 7. Blessings dear friend eve
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Date: 1/21/2015 2:03:00 PM
gosh, this seems so real as if it actually happened to you. Did it? I know some animals are so grief stricken to lose a partner, they will just go kind of crazy. Great entry for Rob's contest.
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Date: 1/21/2015 10:55:00 AM
Nice take on the theme of the contest
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Date: 1/21/2015 3:53:00 AM
Very sad the loss-I understand Upma.God bless. Your friend Rajat
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Date: 1/21/2015 2:49:00 AM
beautifully written story Dr Sharma i am so saddened to read your comment it's true:-( Hugs Jan xx good luck in the contest:-) xx
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Date: 1/21/2015 1:58:00 AM
Oh no they stole your lovely dogs, words don't express my thoughts, if this is true I grieve for you. If fictional, smack for relaying a sad story....well done ...Seren
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 1/21/2015 2:42:00 AM
Thnx for ur kind visit Seren! That's a true story n we felt so helpless n sorry that didn't dare to get any thereafter! I was in tears again as I wrote this! We never cud meet or see them, God know what happened to them!
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Date: 1/21/2015 2:42:00 AM
Thnx for ur kind visit Seren! That's a true story n we felt so helpless n sorry that didn't dare to get any thereafter! I was in tears again as I wrote this! We never cud meet or see them, God knows what happened to them!

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