Currently Late

Summer seize heat.
Winter sees cold.
Spring changes our minds.
Fall surrounds us, sublime.

In the Summer, I twirl the stem of rose.
She twirls like a ballerina with her tutu.

In Winter, she’s brazen in virgin white.
She’s statuesque, tall as an oak.

In Spring, the music box spins and spins.
Her melody is sweet, prim and proper.

In Fall, the springs are shocked.
“Memories,” plays on and on.

I can jump to seasons as if changing channels.
My senses react to the perfume or crisp air.

Currently late
Summer, though
the boat is slow
in Georgia, where
the lights go out
in October, and
my head is high
in the leaves
spinning like
a pinwheel,
through hues
of God’s choosing.

He’s never late,
though we feel delayed.
Our seasons
always show -
on land, on sea,
on me.

and I remember the lamp,
its shade of childhood,
high on my dresser.
I loved the ballerina -
she moved me.

Wondering if we shall glimpse
such things that passed away.
Still we’d give up every last glimpse
to see our loved ones again.

Seasons be.
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Dietrich Avatar
July 25, 2024 at 3:55 PM
Very interesting progression of ideas. I loved the personification throughout, especially the contrasts shown in the first four stanzas
Rodrigues Avatar
July 26, 2024 at 7:29 AM
Thank you, Andrea! Big hugs!
Daniel Avatar
July 25, 2024 at 6:26 AM
Cool poem, Kim:)
Rodrigues Avatar
July 25, 2024 at 6:57 AM
Thanks, Joanna!
Kendrick Avatar
July 25, 2024 at 4:13 AM
Lovely work. I enjoyed reading your lines. Creative and if for a contest it reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Sara K
Rodrigues Avatar
July 25, 2024 at 6:59 AM
Thank you, Sara! I appreciate you :)
Wolf Avatar
July 24, 2024 at 6:26 PM
So much going on in your kaleidoscope of the seasons here, Kim. Lovely sentiment in your last lines.
Rodrigues Avatar
July 24, 2024 at 7:49 PM
Thank you, my friend!
Sands Avatar
July 24, 2024 at 1:53 PM
Excellent writing. I enjoyed this :)
Rodrigues Avatar
July 24, 2024 at 5:56 PM
Thank you, Heidi!
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July 24, 2024 at 5:48 PM
Thank you, Heidi!
Rodrigues Avatar
July 24, 2024 at 5:44 PM
Thank you, Heidi!
Evans Avatar
July 24, 2024 at 12:40 PM
Love your poem, lovely write! Season a changing as seasons of life. It was summer when I was in Georgia in 1998, too hot, too humid .... but did not take the Midnight Train to Georgia ... took a plane, lol ...
Rodrigues Avatar
July 24, 2024 at 5:44 PM
Love that song! It is too hot and humid here. No wonder they had their fans and sweet tea!
Hind Avatar
July 24, 2024 at 11:10 AM
Whoa, absolutely stunning. My breath is stole with the 'seasons be'- always look forward to your poetry <3 xx
Rodrigues Avatar
July 24, 2024 at 5:43 PM
Thank you so much!
Hind Avatar
July 24, 2024 at 11:10 AM
Oh, A FAV as well!!
Lane Avatar
July 24, 2024 at 9:35 AM
Summer and its heat can't come to a close quickly enough for me, Kim. Your couplets cover the seasons quite nicely. Great phrases about the lights going out in Georgia. Fine writing!
Rodrigues Avatar
July 24, 2024 at 5:39 PM
LOL…glad you enjoyed the lights going out in Georgia! Remember when Vicki Lawrence sang about it?
Buhagiar Avatar
July 24, 2024 at 8:11 AM
Loved your spin around the seasons. Great metaphor with the ballerina. Hugs.
Rodrigues Avatar
July 24, 2024 at 5:39 PM
Thank you, dear one!
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