Cupid Goes To Hawaii

Cupid the sweet saintling of Love Village decided to go visit Hawaii Always dressed in a dapper diaper he looked love struck and dashing with frosty gold hair combed just so and silver tip wings oh so fancy he pours love into hearts quicker than a penny in a bucket goes, ping ! When he landed on land he saw pineapples and Hawaiian luaus too rounded hips slow swaying and voices greeting him like an old friend They draped leis on his shoulders then said "welcome to Honolulu" where dreams come true for everyone, yes we got the magic blend; So they put him on a pedestal for he was after all messenger of love he surfed in Lanai, Pineaple Island of sweet , oh you should see Him shooting arrows as he walked on water, fitting them all like a glove Lei skirts ruffled and feet shuffled, as the stars shone beneath a rim They danced and they danced far into the night for love was finally here Cupid did it once again in his dapper diaper and gold tipped spear.
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Kingston Avatar
February 12, 2022 at 10:04 PM
It all sounds so magical, especially Cupid. I loved how you described him and all the imagery in your poem. It is so wonderfully clever. I enjoyed Michelle's comment below that praises your poem by saying it has a "tropical vibe" she's right. I can hear the island music and smell the cocoa butter, I can only imagine meeting this "messenger of love" & sampling the "magic blend" Aaaah.
Inman Avatar
February 9, 2022 at 5:34 PM
It may just be me, but I'm thinking he may be needed more in Alaska this time of the year. ; ) Nice write.
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
February 6, 2022 at 2:14 PM
Prudence favors the fortunate, Vienna, as the competition has been enjoyably noted, my friend, Aloha, aka William~moving forward in life.
Faulkner Avatar
February 4, 2022 at 6:16 PM
I have not been to Hawaii, maybe your Cupid could give me a ride next time? Love the whimsical, tropical vibe (and now I am craving pineapple!)
Rose  Avatar
February 4, 2022 at 7:40 PM
I have a can in my pantry, lol, best I can do is mail it to you, or have Cupid deliver, :)
Deo Avatar
February 4, 2022 at 5:38 AM
Where might I buy one of the dapper diapers? ThanX Vie. Fir church folk, may I replace spear & sharp objects with a Shepherds crook? Ciao. PTL
Deo Avatar
February 4, 2022 at 5:38 AM
Where might I buy one if the dapper diapers? ThanX Vie. Fir church folk, maybibreplace spear & sharp objects with acSheoherds crook? Ciao. PTL
Rose  Avatar
February 4, 2022 at 7:40 PM
I will ask Cupid to send you one parcel post, lol, thanks for reading dear Anil
DiMino Avatar
February 3, 2022 at 5:29 PM
Oh great! Now we will never get him back north. Love this little gem. Brava! Joe.
Rose  Avatar
February 4, 2022 at 7:39 PM
Cupid is everywhere, don't worry he goes North too . Thanks for reading Joe
Laurie Avatar
February 3, 2022 at 3:34 PM
Hello Vie ... as well as Cupid having a great time, in the surf and sun he made a lot of lovers happy as well - well done Vie - Lindsay
De Beaulieu Avatar
February 3, 2022 at 3:31 PM
Hello Mystic Rose, Rose, I love this poem. He brought love to Hawaii. blessings my friend. Hugs.
De Beaulieu Avatar
February 7, 2022 at 11:08 AM
Hello Mystic Rose, Rose, so would I. Maybe cupid would help both of us. LOL.Your welcome. Blessings my friend.
Rose  Avatar
February 4, 2022 at 7:39 PM
Would love to visit the tropics sometime, maybe Cupid will help lol, thanks for reading Darlene
Macfarlane Avatar
February 3, 2022 at 1:21 PM
So darn cute and clever. You rock Vie! Hugs
Rose  Avatar
February 3, 2022 at 3:16 PM
Thank you Cecilia, just having some fun on Valentine season, trying to lift some spirits, and maybe throw a spear or two lol, thanks for the visit my friend, xo
Hankins Avatar
February 3, 2022 at 11:56 AM
Nice, Mystic Rose Rose. I enjoyed Cupid's visit to Hawaii.
Rose  Avatar
February 3, 2022 at 3:17 PM
Thankyou Milton, having fun sharing the love around, glad you liked it :)
Leffanta Avatar
February 3, 2022 at 10:42 AM
And I got the point of it all! Aloha!
Rose  Avatar
February 3, 2022 at 3:17 PM
Nice Rico, mua!
Roper Avatar
February 3, 2022 at 10:18 AM
Cute story, Mystic, Would be nice to visit Hawaii. Hugs my sweet friends
Rose  Avatar
February 3, 2022 at 3:17 PM
Yes I would like it, maybe we can go together one day, drink Pinia colada's on the beach, Hola
Calasibetta Avatar
February 3, 2022 at 6:56 AM
Oh, the hearts he has joined together, in eternal bliss~we hope! Very Sweet, and fitting for Valentines Day. Blessings, Paulette
Rose  Avatar
February 3, 2022 at 7:06 AM
Valentine is arriving soon, so its nice to get in the Spirit of things Palette, thank you for stopping by my page, love and prayers xo
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