Cupid Goes To Hawaii

Cupid the sweet saintling of Love Village decided to go visit Hawaii Always dressed in a dapper diaper he looked love struck and dashing with frosty gold hair combed just so and silver tip wings oh so fancy he pours love into hearts quicker than a penny in a bucket goes, ping ! When he landed on land he saw pineapples and Hawaiian luaus too rounded hips slow swaying and voices greeting him like an old friend They draped leis on his shoulders then said "welcome to Honolulu" where dreams come true for everyone, yes we got the magic blend; So they put him on a pedestal for he was after all messenger of love he surfed in Lanai, Pineaple Island of sweet , oh you should see Him shooting arrows as he walked on water, fitting them all like a glove Lei skirts ruffled and feet shuffled, as the stars shone beneath a rim They danced and they danced far into the night for love was finally here Cupid did it once again in his dapper diaper and gold tipped spear.

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Date: 2/12/2022 10:04:00 PM
It all sounds so magical, especially Cupid. I loved how you described him and all the imagery in your poem. It is so wonderfully clever. I enjoyed Michelle's comment below that praises your poem by saying it has a "tropical vibe" she's right. I can hear the island music and smell the cocoa butter, I can only imagine meeting this "messenger of love" & sampling the "magic blend" Aaaah.
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Date: 2/9/2022 5:34:00 PM
It may just be me, but I'm thinking he may be needed more in Alaska this time of the year. ; ) Nice write.
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Date: 2/6/2022 2:14:00 PM
Prudence favors the fortunate, Vienna, as the competition has been enjoyably noted, my friend, Aloha, aka William~moving forward in life.
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Date: 2/4/2022 6:16:00 PM
I have not been to Hawaii, maybe your Cupid could give me a ride next time? Love the whimsical, tropical vibe (and now I am craving pineapple!)
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Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 2/4/2022 7:40:00 PM
I have a can in my pantry, lol, best I can do is mail it to you, or have Cupid deliver, :)
Date: 2/4/2022 5:38:00 AM
Where might I buy one if the dapper diapers? ThanX Vie. Fir church folk, maybibreplace spear & sharp objects with acSheoherds crook? Ciao. PTL
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Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 2/4/2022 7:40:00 PM
I will ask Cupid to send you one parcel post, lol, thanks for reading dear Anil
Date: 2/4/2022 5:38:00 AM
Where might I buy one of the dapper diapers? ThanX Vie. Fir church folk, may I replace spear & sharp objects with a Shepherds crook? Ciao. PTL
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Date: 2/3/2022 5:29:00 PM
Oh great! Now we will never get him back north. Love this little gem. Brava! Joe.
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Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 2/4/2022 7:39:00 PM
Cupid is everywhere, don't worry he goes North too . Thanks for reading Joe
Date: 2/3/2022 3:34:00 PM
Hello Vie ... as well as Cupid having a great time, in the surf and sun he made a lot of lovers happy as well - well done Vie - Lindsay
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Date: 2/3/2022 3:31:00 PM
Hello Mystic Rose, Rose, I love this poem. He brought love to Hawaii. blessings my friend. Hugs.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/7/2022 11:08:00 AM
Hello Mystic Rose, Rose, so would I. Maybe cupid would help both of us. LOL.Your welcome. Blessings my friend.
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Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 2/4/2022 7:39:00 PM
Would love to visit the tropics sometime, maybe Cupid will help lol, thanks for reading Darlene
Date: 2/3/2022 1:21:00 PM
So darn cute and clever. You rock Vie! Hugs
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Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 2/3/2022 3:16:00 PM
Thank you Cecilia, just having some fun on Valentine season, trying to lift some spirits, and maybe throw a spear or two lol, thanks for the visit my friend, xo
Date: 2/3/2022 11:56:00 AM
Nice, Mystic Rose Rose. I enjoyed Cupid's visit to Hawaii.
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Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 2/3/2022 3:17:00 PM
Thankyou Milton, having fun sharing the love around, glad you liked it :)
Date: 2/3/2022 10:42:00 AM
And I got the point of it all! Aloha!
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Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 2/3/2022 3:17:00 PM
Nice Rico, mua!
Date: 2/3/2022 10:18:00 AM
Cute story, Mystic, Would be nice to visit Hawaii. Hugs my sweet friends
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Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 2/3/2022 3:17:00 PM
Yes I would like it, maybe we can go together one day, drink Pinia colada's on the beach, Hola
Date: 2/3/2022 6:56:00 AM
Oh, the hearts he has joined together, in eternal bliss~we hope! Very Sweet, and fitting for Valentines Day. Blessings, Paulette
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Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 2/3/2022 7:06:00 AM
Valentine is arriving soon, so its nice to get in the Spirit of things Palette, thank you for stopping by my page, love and prayers xo
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