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Cup Full of Hate

(Fever Cure) When I was just a young lad, and one respected ones mum and dad! An annual visitor uninvited befelled one’s youth, an infliction born of distempered walls and arctic drafts. The doctor would be called to staidly produce an opinion, “Seven days indoors” Before proceeding to scribble in Latin, my wholesome cure, “A cure to endure” If only to fix one’s redemption. Each day the prescribed tonic, equaled one quarter of a cup with the instructions to sip slowly “Oh! So slowly” While my mother’s brown eyes never once left my agonizing plight, the taste indescribable, yet a remnant of memory tells one, it could dwell in this very ink, I write with today! © Harry J Horsman 2005

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 9/29/2010 12:46:00 AM
You survived the ink!! I too was given that to drink- Congrats on the win Harry
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Date: 9/17/2010 7:15:00 AM
Congratulations Harry on your win in Deborah Guzzi's contest "The Road to Well Ville" Love, Carol
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Date: 9/16/2010 8:16:00 PM
Loved this first time I saw it. Congats to you! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 9/16/2010 5:58:00 PM
Congratulations Harry on your # 8. Agape, Moses
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Date: 9/16/2010 5:34:00 PM
Congrats Harry on your winning poem in Deb's contest... a great entry my friend.. enjoy your big win tonight with luv..
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Date: 9/16/2010 3:40:00 PM
Mm couldn't be castor oil. That much would have killed you. I wonder what it was in that cup. Congratulations on a great write and win. Joyce
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Date: 9/16/2010 3:09:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in the contest, Harry!! So happy to see you in the winners' circle. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/13/2010 8:07:00 AM
Today they try to make good-tasting medicines for children, but I do remember some that tasted awful and could very well have been ingredients in ink, Harry. Very nice entry for the Road to Wellville contest and I wish you success. Thanks for your comments on Quetzalcoatl. The Europeans not only brought weapons but also diseases that killed the Aztecs and Native American cultures. Don't take any bad medicine, okay? Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/7/2010 9:55:00 AM
Harry I just love this write, reminded me of my childhood and those meds my mom use to give me :) best wishes to you, love Wilma
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Date: 9/7/2010 7:21:00 AM
oh, wow, I love your description of this vile cure. The ending fits it perfectly!! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 9/6/2010 7:57:00 PM
This is fine Harry please go ahead and enter the contest! Thanks so much for reading my verses & participating. Light & Love
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