Cup Full of Hate

(Fever Cure)

When I was just a young lad,
and one respected ones
mum and dad!
An annual visitor
uninvited befelled one’s youth,
an infliction born of
distempered walls
and arctic drafts.
The doctor would be called
to staidly produce an opinion,
“Seven days indoors”
Before proceeding to scribble
in Latin, my wholesome cure,
“A cure to endure”
If only to fix one’s redemption.
Each day the prescribed tonic,
equaled one quarter of a cup
with the instructions to sip
slowly “Oh! So slowly” While
my mother’s brown eyes
never once left my agonizing
plight, the taste indescribable,
yet a remnant of memory
tells one, it could dwell
in this very ink,
I write with today!

© Harry J Horsman  2005
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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September 29, 2010 at 12:46 AM
You survived the ink!! I too was given that to drink- Congrats on the win Harry
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September 17, 2010 at 7:15 AM
Congratulations Harry on your win in Deborah Guzzi's contest "The Road to Well Ville" Love, Carol
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September 16, 2010 at 8:16 PM
Loved this first time I saw it. Congats to you! Luv, Andrea
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September 16, 2010 at 5:58 PM
Congratulations Harry on your # 8. Agape, Moses
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September 16, 2010 at 5:34 PM
Congrats Harry on your winning poem in Deb's contest... a great entry my friend.. enjoy your big win tonight with luv..
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September 16, 2010 at 3:40 PM
Mm couldn't be castor oil. That much would have killed you. I wonder what it was in that cup. Congratulations on a great write and win. Joyce
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September 16, 2010 at 3:09 PM
Congratulations on your win in the contest, Harry!! So happy to see you in the winners' circle. Love, Carolyn
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September 13, 2010 at 8:07 AM
Today they try to make good-tasting medicines for children, but I do remember some that tasted awful and could very well have been ingredients in ink, Harry. Very nice entry for the Road to Wellville contest and I wish you success. Thanks for your comments on Quetzalcoatl. The Europeans not only brought weapons but also diseases that killed the Aztecs and Native American cultures. Don't take any bad medicine, okay? Love, Carolyn
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September 7, 2010 at 9:55 AM
Harry I just love this write, reminded me of my childhood and those meds my mom use to give me :) best wishes to you, love Wilma
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September 7, 2010 at 7:21 AM
oh, wow, I love your description of this vile cure. The ending fits it perfectly!! Luv, Andrea
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September 6, 2010 at 7:57 PM
This is fine Harry please go ahead and enter the contest! Thanks so much for reading my verses & participating. Light & Love
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