Culture Shock

I saw it in a film: his city is beautiful.
Snow is everywhere, the trees are crowned
with it, and ice skims the harbor,
frosts ships, going nowhere. Even when
he held me, there was ice in his heart,

Ice in the pale blue of the washed-out
sky beyond his closed eyelids, ice
beading his vodka skin, and
"You are hot," he said,  "Hot,
hot, hot..."
Copyright © | Year Posted 2007

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Andresen Avatar
August 11, 2013 at 10:37 AM
- Congratulations on having your poem featured on the homepage "Featured Poem of the Week" - Have a nice day, Nola. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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August 11, 2013 at 6:50 AM
Nola, , '''CONGRATULATIONS''' On your featured poem of the week... Have yourself a nice and beautiful Sunday... -XOX- Love Linda
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August 7, 2013 at 11:38 AM
Nola hi congrats on being featured shadow smiles
Austin Avatar
August 6, 2013 at 10:01 AM
Love this icy-hot tune, Nola. Congrats on the selection. Love, daver
Goff Avatar
July 11, 2009 at 4:03 PM
wishing you warm thoughts! sweet poem! Nola! ...your Son is doing a terrific job! you are to be commended for fine parenting!!! thanks for comments, your friend..jimbo
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