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Awarded:  Second Place

Contest:  Oh What a Shape I'm In!

Sponsored by:  Debbie Guzzi

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Dear Mr. Kelly, P l e a s e ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! leave me alone, 4 I can not bare the pain knowing u will let me down after dancing with me through the streets of town laughing and splashing and singing in the rain only 2 go back 2 that sun goddess and bask in her glow again and again and leave me standing in the corner in a pool of tears cried in v a i n ‘ ‘ ‘ ‘ ‘ Yours truly, Um Brella

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Date: 11/30/2020 2:07:00 PM
Very clever: The poem and the shape :)
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Elaine George
Date: 12/4/2020 3:29:00 AM
Thank you for your kind comments, Gary...much appreciated. ~ Elaine
Date: 11/30/2020 6:22:00 AM
I love the umbrella! It works so well with your powerful poetry. Congratulations on the win :)
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Elaine George
Date: 12/4/2020 3:28:00 AM
Thank you, P.M. Much appreciated. ~ Elaine
Date: 11/30/2020 12:42:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... the content, and the form as well. God bless you.
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Elaine George
Date: 12/4/2020 3:25:00 AM
Thank you, dear Beats. ~ Elaine
Date: 11/29/2020 10:25:00 PM
Elaine, this is classy, clever, and admirable. I was just singing this song today; we have a family game where you are given a word and you have to sing a song with that word in it - my word was 'rain'. Adorable! Congrats on your win ~ John
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Elaine George
Date: 12/4/2020 3:22:00 AM
Thank you for your kind comments, John...much appreciated. ~ Elaine
Date: 11/29/2020 11:54:00 AM
Congrats on your winning work. Yes, doing these shapes isn't an easy endeavor but you did really well with it. Sara
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Elaine George
Date: 11/29/2020 8:41:00 PM
Thank you, dear Sara. ~ Elaine
Date: 11/29/2020 11:33:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win in the "SHAPE UP" contest, Elaine :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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Elaine George
Date: 11/29/2020 8:45:00 PM
Thank you so much, Anne-Lise. ~ Elaine
Date: 11/29/2020 7:51:00 AM
Made me smile a thousand times! Lonna
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Elaine George
Date: 11/29/2020 8:46:00 PM
I am glad I made you smile, dear Lonna. Thank you for commenting. ~ Elaine
Date: 3/12/2017 12:34:00 AM
delightfully clever!
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Date: 3/5/2017 7:55:00 PM
How clever , an umbrella shape. Well written. Congrats
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Date: 11/30/2009 9:58:00 PM
Elaine, congrats on your success in Deborah's contest...Raul
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Date: 11/30/2009 1:01:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Deborah's contest Lainie. Love,Carol
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Date: 11/30/2009 12:02:00 PM
Great job! Enjoyed this! Congrats! Hugs, Robin
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Date: 11/30/2009 10:29:00 AM
Lovely shape and design Elaine, congrats on your second place >> James
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Date: 11/30/2009 8:58:00 AM
Congrats, Lainie, on your 2nd place win in Deb's contest.. truly unique concrete poem and well deserved win.. nice to be sharing the same stage with u.. blessings ... luv.. and thankxxx for your many nice comments on my poetry always... blessings ... luv... Linda-Marie, "Sweetie"
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Date: 11/29/2009 11:37:00 PM
Congrats on your success in Debbie's contest Elaine.Rgds Brian
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Date: 11/29/2009 6:28:00 PM
I've never felt so sorry for an umbrella before!! Great job, Elaine! Congratulations on your 2nd place winning poem! ~ Love, Carrie
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Date: 11/29/2009 5:19:00 PM
Wonderful, Lainie! Congratulations on yet another outstanding piece being honored! Hugs, Donna
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Date: 10/13/2009 12:51:00 PM
Awesome indeed! Just put me 2 "d's" in goddess please LOL..Thanks for the charming entry oh inspired one!Light & Love
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Date: 10/3/2008 4:47:00 PM
This is awesome, Elaine. I've never tried Shape poetry but you certainly have this form nailed ... beautiful job!! Wasn't he a great dancer ... smile ... and that was wonderful movie ... thanks so much for this one!!
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Date: 9/21/2008 8:23:00 PM
Hello Dear Elainie My goodness this is such a clever witty write. I love the umbrella so creative. From beginning to end I was captivated by every word. Shame on Mr. Kelly is didn't appreciate what he had. I say, if you don't like what brewing move over, cause there's someone else who does! Blessings to you and yours. Just beautiful hun! Love Light Truth Patricia
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Date: 9/11/2008 6:08:00 AM
Dear Elaine, I can feel the pain YOU suffer in this Excellent Shape POEM I see Please as tears falling into a glass and in vain as those same tears falling through the glass to the ground where YOU stand. Very inspiring ALWAYS YOURS...HG
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Date: 9/11/2008 5:23:00 AM
He was wonderful, wasn't he. In the Movie ride at MGM Disney in Orlando, they have a statue of Gene Kelly with an umbrella and singing "Singing in The Rain." God Bless, Lainie. Vince
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Date: 9/9/2008 6:03:00 PM
hi Elaine, I hope that someone will find you who is deserving, this is a pain-filled write, take care D-nyce
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Date: 9/9/2008 1:58:00 PM
Oh very well done, perfect form and superb contents. Good job. Love Heidie
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Date: 9/9/2008 1:44:00 PM
This is an excellent concrete poem. I like the topography. The message comes to life with your choice of figurative language. Where have you been? Great job! ~Joseph
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