Crying In the Rain
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Dear Mr. Kelly,
P
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s
e
! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
leave me alone, 4 I can not bare
the pain knowing u will let me
down after dancing with me
through the streets of town
laughing and splashing
and singing in the rain
only 2 go back 2 that
sun goddess and
bask in her glow
again and again
and leave me
standing in
the corner
in a pool
of tears
cried
in
v
a
i
n
‘ ‘
‘ ‘
‘
Yours truly,
Um Brella
Copyright © Elaine George | Year Posted 2008
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