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Crush the Sun into Honey

bleeding …out gravity …zero orion desire halo in knots - dream architect on earth we are weightless eating the darkness wings wayward whisper death to the master in the seam there is energy bending brutality moon slowly peeling body consuming unfolding universe flower defiant cosmos crush the sun into honey and pour its light into life resin thick and sweet amber skin soft and gentle kiss the swelling soul lest the dissolving translucence re-slants the horizon towards the rain and melts its color into dusk where my mind anchored in silence restless bleeds …out

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Date: 3/25/2024 3:51:00 PM
This is very orginal...it feels like you're making your own slant, beautiful
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Mat Ignacio
Date: 3/27/2024 9:55:00 AM
thank you for the comment, paige
Date: 3/23/2024 3:01:00 PM
I appreciate your originality and creativity, Mat. I especially liked these lines: kiss the swelling soul lest the dissolving translucence re-slants the horizon towards the rain Wishing you a pleasant evening, Sara
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Mat Ignacio
Date: 3/24/2024 9:48:00 AM
Thank you Sara
Date: 3/23/2024 1:40:00 AM
Love your chosen words, they are so urgent and compelling. Lots of beautiful and original expressions here
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Mat Ignacio
Date: 3/24/2024 9:47:00 AM
Thank you for this

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