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Crumpled Tears : a Quinzaine Poem

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tears spill crumpled memories are they laundered dry? or rehashed?
* quinzaine is a 3-line poem consisting of 15 syllables: 7/5/3. the first line makes a statement, the next two ask a question concerning that statement all rights reserved © . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . Contest: Brian Strand”s “ Whatever"

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Date: 5/20/2011 10:07:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brian's "Whatever"contest Nette. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/15/2011 4:55:00 PM
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Date: 5/15/2011 4:47:00 PM
Congratulations, Nette, on your awesome win. A new form I had never seen before too!
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Date: 5/15/2011 5:50:00 AM
ooh yeah ..love this poem lesson and the awesome imagery of your poem, Nette. Thank you so much for both. Talent seems more concentrated somehow in these short poetic gems, doesn't it ? Congratulations to you! (I will be attempting one of these soon I hope)
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Date: 5/14/2011 9:58:00 PM
This form is new to me, but I really like it, must try it, I love that first line~~
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Date: 5/14/2011 9:50:00 PM
Great job with this! Congrats on your win. It's an honor to be up there with you guys. God Bless. R.M.
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Date: 5/14/2011 9:49:00 PM
Great job with this! Congrats on your win. It's an honor to be up there with you guys. God Bless. R.M.
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Date: 5/14/2011 8:27:00 PM
The from is new to me..I like it...and I like your poem. Congrats on your win. BG
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Date: 5/14/2011 6:04:00 PM
Cool Nette! Great to see you in a top spot again. Congratulations on your poem's success in Brian's inspiring contest. Agape, Moses
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Date: 5/14/2011 1:50:00 PM
Dear Nette, Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/14/2011 1:32:00 PM
A winner from the moment you wrote it... Congrats my dear Poet friend...luv Michael
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Date: 5/14/2011 1:20:00 PM
Congratulations on the second place win in the contest, nette
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Date: 5/14/2011 12:56:00 PM
hey hey hey ..yeah yeah yeah.. congrats Nette on your big win in Whatever contest with this super write and form luv.. enjoy a perfect win with luv..my sweet friend..
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Date: 5/14/2011 10:55:00 AM
Sometimes after crying I do feel "laundered dry," Nette. Great use of a form that is new to me. Best wishes of success in Brian's contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/14/2011 1:03:00 AM
Hi, Nette. you are very well informed on poetry forms. And you adhered perfectly to this form's definition. It was nice seeing you here. I am going to go off now finally!! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 5/13/2011 8:05:00 PM
Amazing poetry from you Nette.A new form learnt.Best wishes....
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Date: 5/13/2011 8:02:00 PM
this is simply amazing Nette dear friend.. interesting questions to ponder as your intro line has deep impact luv.. much success in Brian's contest.. u also have soup mail..happy weekend..
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Date: 5/13/2011 1:07:00 PM
* “Your Beauty Is Sooo Gifted & Bright * Blessed & Hip Unto Poetry's Trip * Beautiful Nette Oncloud * And As For This Lovely Posed In Poe * Hopefully It Shall Always Be The Afore * Rather Than Latter Of The Museful Question Brushed * Smile * You Are A Very Unique, Talented & Beautiful Poetess * Hugs & Kisses * Kisses & Hugs * Sarah” *
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Date: 5/13/2011 11:41:00 AM
oo,, nice Nette,,, i like the sense here,,, and good luck to you,,kuddos,,,p,.d.
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Date: 5/13/2011 11:33:00 AM
coming across this form of poem for first time very nicely expressed cheers suresh
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