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Crossing the Line

Feeling totally frustated, everything totally disorganized Could it be that the time spent in front of computer screen Is worshipping satan in his very clever disguise No, no that could not be it for this is fun, entertainment

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Gert W. Knop

Date: 1/15/2010 4:23:00 AM

Hi Sara, I believe we all spend too much time on that, but it can truely become a mania. Thank you for your comments....Gert

Scarlett Sepulvado Anderson

Date: 1/14/2010 4:53:00 PM

I like this one too. Thanks for reading my poems. Have a great day! Scarlett

James Fraser

Date: 1/14/2010 1:41:00 PM

Nice little piece Sara >> James

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/14/2010 12:57:00 PM

OH, yes, I reallly can relate to this one, dearie. (I am a very naughty girl) Good one, Sara! Luv, andrea

Joyce Johnson

Date: 1/14/2010 11:42:00 AM

Sounds like you're just tired. Satan is not involved. The good feeling that you left with me with your kind comments, do not come from Satan. Love, Joyce

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 1/14/2010 7:58:00 AM

you wonder?? Just limit it so you can do for him and dad. lol

Yoni Dvorkis

Date: 1/14/2010 6:24:00 AM

Wow, i think the line is very clearly drawn right where satan enters the picture. I would imagine tying him in some way to PS is where you cross it;) I could give a million reasons why I'd agree something feels weird and unnatural on the internet, people seem so friendly yet you can never hear their voices or see their faces. Besides, satan's in remission now, he'll return when he finds another email account he can use (PS board calls him the 'undesirable'). clever disguise indeed.