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"Murder me" she whispered ... Lips pressed to my nape, nipping skin For her betrayal of husband and family meant as much We both knew the sacrifices, and accepted the cost that instant Then, and for the scandalous times to come She was lost to me - straddling, pressing - and I lost in her So rooted that I was becoming her, in flesh Nothing mattered anymore but passion and its pyre Burning all in its wake, all that had mattered ... 'til then It was a horrid thing for her to say, to place in such dire phrasing Yet it was ALL that I wanted, needed, cared to hear "Murder me" she whispered again, pressing down ... "For I am nothing now ... but yours." ~ 2nd Place ~ in the "Strand Special 3, Any Form, Any Theme" Poetry Contest, Brian Strand, Judge & Sponsor. ~ 2nd Place ~ in the "Writing Challenge 4, May 2019, No Placement" Poetry Contest, Dear Heart, Judge & Sponsor. * This poem was N/A'd on April 26, 2019 in the "April 2019 Premiere 9, Any Theme, Any Form, Up To A Max Of 14 Lines" Poetry Contest. *

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Date: 12/16/2019 3:01:00 PM
Congrats on your winning poem Greg
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Date: 6/2/2019 11:40:00 AM
Greg, congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this wonderful write ~
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 6/29/2019 12:28:00 AM
Thank you for finding this so worthy, Constance, I greatly appreciate my placement ... I think this is one of my most passionate, (and such a fun genre to write in!). Blessings, my friend! :o) <3
Date: 5/31/2019 4:46:00 PM
A beautiful romantic verse, Greg, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 6/29/2019 12:27:00 AM
Thank you so very much, Eve, I'm pleased that you liked it. Blessings, my friend! :o) <3
Date: 4/15/2019 12:48:00 AM
Greg, when you stop writing poetry, please let me know your "Romance Novel Writer"'s pseudo name. I think you could make a fortune. Word of advice, choose a female's name. That's what those readers want.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 4/18/2019 6:25:00 AM
Thank you so much, Caren, I've been considering a sci-fi novel, though it would have romance in it, too, of course. Many blessings, my friend! :-) <3
Date: 4/10/2019 7:59:00 AM
Murder me with love...Nice concept...All the best Gregory
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 4/10/2019 8:16:00 PM
Thank you so very much, Arturo, I'm happy you enjoyed it, my friend! :-)
Date: 4/10/2019 7:57:00 AM
That little death. ;) Wowsah. I'm up now! Fantastic piece Greg, good morning my friend! xomo <3
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 4/10/2019 8:15:00 PM
Many kind thanks, Maureen, I'm pleased you enjoyed this one ... I like going "new" and unexpected places - pushing the envelope, so-to-speak, and consider acts and emotions that I feel are outside my own limits, (yet, perhaps they're not). It's easy to make judgements from the outside looking in, but if actuality makes US a character, what would we REALLY do? Hmmm ... those questions of morality that dim in the heat of moments. ;-) <3

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