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Cries of the Empty Night

Cries of the Empty Night I thirst for your tender tears for they fill my solitudes I smell your fragrance but kiss the mist come to me my love I wait for the rousing rain each drop a kiss that I taste I hunger within the anxious night your touch that embraces my heart ripples of your love adrift in my tears of desire sailing the silent seas I would sacrifice my eyes If your face was the last I saw as the darkness whispers to the light I wait for you my love with cries in the empty night a silhouette fades away my soul awaits you In eternity. This poem was inspired by Brandy Nicole...she tried a bit of my style...and now I am returning the favor...doesn't come close to her engaging, beautiful elegant style...but she has the magic touch(she's a girl lol)...thank you, Brandy...you inspire, along with other beautiful ladies on this site... Sept.09.2018 PREMIERE CONTEST NO 175,ANY FORM,ANY THEME Sponsored by: Brian Strand Placed 9'th

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Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 9/26/2018 2:27:00 AM

Keep your eyes, you might need them to see the heartwarming and the sad stuff around you. And keep the soul and the poetry just the same. I enjoyed reading this very much, Kind wishes, Kai

Lisa Ricci

Date: 9/12/2018 4:26:00 AM

Good Morning Winged. I found this entry so smooth when reading. The voice and tone are both poetic not to mention your chosen title itself. And yes, In my eyes and ears your ending thought and line is a marvelous poetic touch and expression. Best of luck with the contest. It was an honor turning to your page.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 9/10/2018 10:47:00 AM

The longing is evident within, that ache to feel love close- it being so far away. "each drop a kiss that I taste" This thought truly moves me. Love lingers upon the lips- even in the light mist of the rain. Those tears that fall. This image of the moving water, the moon in the background truly sets the mood. Simply breathtaking. It is so sweet of you to say that I have inspired you. :) Congratulations on this win. This is a keeper for me. ~ Brandy

Besma Riabi Dziri

Date: 9/10/2018 1:08:00 AM

A talented pen, a masterful grip, a soaring imagination, a heart of a poet you are able to cross all the oceans of creative writing Winged Warrior! You never cease to amaze your reader! A great pleasure to read your creative beauties. Keep shining. Be blessed always.