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Cricket Tunes

So fragile, those cricket tunes pulsing through early autumn's rhapsodic winds, to serenade unfurled blooms while night glimmers through a gentle musicale: how the cadence drifts like a percussion ticking with air's tempo where notes whistle buzz about October's exit and prodigal winter's return... A melody echoes through amber cypress without purpose, just innately quaking along street lamps nonchalant as tumbled leaves-- that I, an evening-child absorb this orchestral play, enthralled by a mellow alto winging upon my bosom, until cricket hymns gradually vanish, this finale softer than soft... how midnight closes its autumnal fest for a patron like myself etching this last soundtrack, my balm! 1/15/2019 Music to My Ears : For Silent One

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Date: 2/17/2019 1:03:00 PM
- Congratulations on your great 2nd place in the contest, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/16/2019 3:23:00 PM
Many congrats on your win, Nette. I enjoyed this lovely poem very much...thank you for sharing. Elaine
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Date: 2/16/2019 3:18:00 PM
Beautiful imagery, nette.
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Date: 2/16/2019 1:11:00 PM
You have orchestrated a lovely symphony...Congrats on your win..
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Date: 2/16/2019 8:46:00 AM
Oh the sound of crickets, clever take on the contest Nette.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Date: 2/15/2019 8:15:00 PM
I so love the sound of crickets. Wonderful write Nette! xomo
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Date: 2/15/2019 2:02:00 PM
Fantastic write, nette and I expect to see it at the top of the winner's list! I too am lulled to sleep with the chirping of crickets when they are in season around here. Thanks for your very encouraging comments re things to retrieve if the house was on fire. Footles are kinda hard to concoct but I love doing them. Best to you always - Bob
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Date: 2/15/2019 12:44:00 PM
- A beautiful serenade, Nette :) - Luck in the contest :) - hugs and happy weekend // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/15/2019 12:28:00 PM
Great images abound in this wonderful ode to crickets whose sounds waft through endless summer nights. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 2/15/2019 12:28:00 PM
Superb write..music allover..you wrote a winning poem, Nette.
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Date: 2/15/2019 12:26:00 PM
Well done Nette! :)
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