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Creation's Colours - Colab

Flowers with colours enchant me, Buds budding and blooming, Beauty surrounds, fills me with glee, Nature’s way of grooming; Critters with colours charm me too, Paws dancing; tails wagging. Talented tricks they learn to do, Hear pet owners bragging. Multicolored folk glow with light, Kids gleam with hearts of gold. Red and yellow, brown, black and white God made us all we’re told. To show God’s colours, it’s our part To shine on His wavelength. Charged to love Him with all our heart, With all our soul and strength. Looking around, I stand in awe of God in creation, I want to dance and shout hurrah! Such is heart’s elation! April 23, 2023 Author’s Notes: Joanna Daniel wrote the first and last stanzas; I joined in with the middle three. In writing this, I discovered that it is the wavelength of light that determines color and the wavelength of sound determines pitch.

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Beryl Edmonds

Date: 5/2/2023 9:02:00 AM

Reason, a blooming beautiful collaboration with Joanna. Congratulations on your win in the contest… Belle

Reason A. Poteet
Date: 5/2/2023 12:58:00 PM

So glad for the read and the supportive remark, I thank you Belle, I'll go now and read your entry.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 5/2/2023 7:27:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A wonderful write. Have a blessed day..................

Joanna Daniel

Date: 5/2/2023 1:27:00 AM

Very true, Reason, you made this theme universal:) congratulations, enjoyed our collab:)

Reason A. Poteet
Date: 5/2/2023 6:38:00 AM

thank you, Joanna, I too liked the challenge, the opportunity to combine thoughts.

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 4/25/2023 6:19:00 AM

Fabulous addition with the critters and people. Your take expands the thought much more than mine. Very nice! Thanks for visiting my page and commenting. :)

Reason A. Poteet
Date: 4/25/2023 8:20:00 AM

Thank you, Linda, I am still toying with the idea of working in God's "rainbow" but it would likely take another whole stanza and three is the limit. I never know what a sponsor is looking for; I welcome your read and reply very much.