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Cracked Lips

winter's whip... howling winds... cracked lips... children laugh

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 11/21/2021 4:58:00 PM

We sure do have different attitudes about the winter.

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 11/13/2021 7:00:00 PM

How cracked lips smart when the children laugh. A superb winter Senryu… Belle

Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/13/2021 8:59:00 PM

Hey, thanks for the encouragement, Belle. Happy Sunday, Gershon

Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/13/2021 8:59:00 PM

Hey, thanks for the encouragement, Belle. Happy Sunday, Gershon

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/13/2021 10:19:00 AM

love all this imagery, Gershon. Unique senryu.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/13/2021 8:57:00 PM

Thanks for the high marks on this one, Andrea. Here's to a happy, restful Sunday! ~ gw

Bill Baker

Date: 11/12/2021 9:42:00 PM

You painted a clear picture of winter, the snap, the crackle and the pop of it. Nice one, I enjoyed the read and the shiver it gave me. :-) Write on! Bill

Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/13/2021 8:58:00 PM

Rice Krispies by the fireplace: Snap, Crackle and Pop ... When you finish the box, go out and shop. Smiles, Gershon

Valsa George

Date: 11/12/2021 7:45:00 PM

Wow .... another intense winter'bite'!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/13/2021 8:57:00 PM

Intensity is my trademark. Or at least it used to be ... Would you believe that I am actually a child trapped in a Type-A psyche? Laughs galore, Gershon

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 11/12/2021 7:22:00 PM

My hubby gave me lip balm for my birthday (strawberry flavored) - and I love it! Bring on winter's whip!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/13/2021 8:54:00 PM

May the strawberry lip balm keep your lips safe and calm! Bring on winter -- in Oregon, anyway. lol. :) gw

David Mchattie

Date: 11/12/2021 7:17:00 PM

It snowed here yesterday...I'm not ready. Stay warm my friend.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/13/2021 7:39:00 PM

I'm not ready for it to snow anywhere near you either, David. The nerve of that white stuff. Send it my way, so I can turn it into cotton candy, will ya?!