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fine lines sketched into my mirror how did they get there? weathering the decades, furrowed brow, creased eyes with bags am i an old bag - nonsense. the mirror crack'd with an angry whiplash i had to take a look at my life, evaluate, extenuate my outlook. hope for this old hag - that kind of self talk for the birds. bright city lights, broadway trimmed my mirror looking extravagant, even with its pits, spots, wrinkles of time better lived than alone am i a crackpot? If i am i’m sipping from a loving cup grateful for the full ride i abide in the faithful arms of Jesus Christ his mirror was treacherous, scarred his countenance was cracked so much so that he was unidentifiable except for the blood that loved that exuded pure love if i’m proud, my self is humbled i’ll take those tracks - there is traction in suffering and giving back to my fellow man lightly i cover up those wrinkles only to blend this well-lived face i face my reflection, satisfied without indiscretion’s distraction 3/10/2023 Sponsor: Anthony Biaanco

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Date: 3/23/2023 11:26:00 AM
Kim, this is amazing work. I mean it. Had me captured.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/23/2023 11:35:00 AM
Thank you so much, Paige!
Date: 3/11/2023 6:50:00 PM
From the cracks emerge the character, I guess...
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/11/2023 7:04:00 PM
I would suppose…thanks, dear one!
Date: 3/11/2023 7:51:00 AM
Love this brilliant write Kim! :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/11/2023 9:28:00 AM
Thank you, Linda!
Date: 3/11/2023 3:31:00 AM
Reads like a good contender for the contest. Life issues out the lines, but love keeps on giving. Thanks for sharing this one and for dropping by my page. Sara
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/11/2023 9:28:00 AM
Thank you, Sara!
Date: 3/10/2023 9:03:00 AM
Those wrinkles are road maps of the life you lived to be worn like a badge of honor, Kim. Old bag, not hardly next time you look in the mirrir, smile:)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/10/2023 9:35:00 AM
That is the only thing that lifts my face ;) Thanks, Daniel!
Date: 3/10/2023 8:06:00 AM
- :))) .. there is nothing wrong with the "old hag", Kim :))) - the mirror cracked ... throw it in the trash :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/10/2023 9:35:00 AM
LOL! Thanks, Anne-Lise!

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