Notes About The Poem

Cracked

fine lines sketched into my mirror
how did they get there? weathering
the decades, furrowed brow, creased
eyes with bags am i an old bag -
nonsense.

the mirror crack'd with an angry
whiplash i had to take a look
at my life, evaluate, extenuate
my outlook. hope for this old hag -
that kind of self talk for the birds.

bright city lights, broadway trimmed
my mirror looking extravagant, even
with its pits, spots, wrinkles of time
better lived than alone

am i a crackpot? If i am
i’m sipping from a loving cup
grateful for the full ride
i abide in the faithful arms
of Jesus Christ

his mirror was treacherous, scarred
his countenance was cracked
so much so that he was unidentifiable 
except for the blood that loved
that exuded pure love

if i’m proud, my self is humbled
i’ll take those tracks - there is
traction in suffering and giving back
to my fellow man

lightly i cover up those wrinkles
only to blend this well-lived face
i face my reflection, satisfied
without indiscretion’s distraction

3/10/2023
Sponsor: Anthony Biaanco
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Hind Avatar
March 23, 2023 at 11:26 AM
Kim, this is amazing work. I mean it. Had me captured.
Rodrigues Avatar
March 23, 2023 at 11:35 AM
Thank you so much, Paige!
Wolf Avatar
March 11, 2023 at 6:50 PM
From the cracks emerge the character, I guess...
Rodrigues Avatar
March 11, 2023 at 7:04 PM
I would suppose…thanks, dear one!
Fowler Avatar
March 11, 2023 at 7:51 AM
Love this brilliant write Kim! :)
Rodrigues Avatar
March 11, 2023 at 9:28 AM
Thank you, Linda!
Kendrick Avatar
March 11, 2023 at 3:31 AM
Reads like a good contender for the contest. Life issues out the lines, but love keeps on giving. Thanks for sharing this one and for dropping by my page. Sara
Rodrigues Avatar
March 11, 2023 at 9:28 AM
Thank you, Sara!
Turner Avatar
March 10, 2023 at 9:03 AM
Those wrinkles are road maps of the life you lived to be worn like a badge of honor, Kim. Old bag, not hardly next time you look in the mirrir, smile:)
Rodrigues Avatar
March 10, 2023 at 9:35 AM
That is the only thing that lifts my face ;) Thanks, Daniel!
Andresen Avatar
March 10, 2023 at 8:06 AM
- :))) .. there is nothing wrong with the "old hag", Kim :))) - the mirror cracked ... throw it in the trash :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
Rodrigues Avatar
March 10, 2023 at 9:35 AM
LOL! Thanks, Anne-Lise!
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