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Cracked

Being cracked is no better than being shattered or broken. Ask a heart if this is true. ~ Quote by poet ~ Morning broke at the crack of dawn I gave the phrase thought, with a yawn Alluding to sudden daybreak? That logic caused my head to ache A strange idiom for first light Sunrise was such a lovely sight I rose from bed and stretched my back Pondering things that had a crack I saw one on the bathroom floor One that had not been there before I looked into my cracked mirror wishing my image was clearer In the shower I spent a while staring at cracks in the wall tile Had I never noticed the flaws? I wondered, What had been the cause? I cracked an egg, and then I thought Did I just stop a beating heart? When an egg is cracked from within a brand-new life will soon begin But cracked from the outside, life ends and there's no way to make amends I couldn't eat it, scrambled or fried Grabbed my jacket and went outside There was a hopscotch drawn in chalk and hairline cracks in the sidewalk I stepped over all that I could It took me back to my childhood Days of playing with my stuffed bear To times when I didn't have a care When I rode on ponies, barebacked without noticing things were cracked Some can be fixed; some never mend Some leave us shattered in the end Ask a heart that has been broken by odious words ill-spoken It will say, "From a crack I bleed. My destiny has been decreed." Anything cracked loses its strength when from love, it's held at arm's length January 20, 2022 C Form - Couplet Contest Chosen Theme - Cracked Sponsor: Constance LaFrance Syllables checked with HMS

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Date: 2/15/2022 7:27:00 PM
Beautiful, poignant - congratulations on your win Lin
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Date: 1/31/2022 9:07:00 AM
Congratulations on your 1st place win in the contest. Great flow, great rhyme, great depth of thought on the subject "Cracked". :) Paulette
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Date: 1/31/2022 7:24:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Your "Cracked" is a beautiful write. I love it. Have a blessed day/week.............
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Date: 1/31/2022 6:46:00 AM
Wow and congrats on your first place. "Some can be fixed; some never mend Some leave us shattered in the end" that's just deep.
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Date: 1/31/2022 6:03:00 AM
"Some can be fixed; some never mend Some leave us shattered in the end" - very beautiful. Congratulations!
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Date: 1/31/2022 6:01:00 AM
Congratulations on winning first place in the Couplet contest with your beautifully written poetry, which earned you the highest honor.
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Date: 1/30/2022 8:27:00 PM
This is beautiful Lin. Congratulations on your great win, dear !
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Date: 1/30/2022 4:24:00 PM
Awesome!!! Congrats!
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Date: 1/30/2022 2:51:00 PM
Why did I read your poem about cracks Lin, I’m spotting them everywhere now lol, you really thought this one out quite brilliantly, with great rhyming sequences too, but paradoxically there are no cracks in your poem, cheers David
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Date: 1/30/2022 2:30:00 PM
Lin, congratulations on your First Place win in my C Forms - Couplet contest with your beautifully penned poem, it touched my heart deeply and I love your created quote ~ Constance
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Date: 1/22/2022 8:44:00 AM
Wonderfully written Lin, I think we all exist and live with many cracks. It can also be the cracks that make us strong.
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Lin Lane
Date: 1/29/2022 5:41:00 AM
Hi Mark. You are correct. Cracks are flaws we imperfect humans share.
Date: 1/21/2022 9:09:00 AM
The words were meant for you, Lin. I had the "C" contest on my mind and Constance (C) just jumped onto the page. I corrected it after reading the poem to my wife, but you were too quick for me to hide my mistake. lol Have a great day! Bill
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Lin Lane
Date: 1/21/2022 9:53:00 AM
aww, Bill, I was just teasing with you. I knew what you meant. I learned two things about you this morning. 1. You return to read replies to your comments (a good thing) 2. When you find a poem you like, you share it with your wife. Both of these I see as an honor to receive. Thank you very kindly for your thoughtfulness, Bill.
Date: 1/21/2022 9:00:00 AM
I Enjoyed the "Crack Tour", Lin. It should do well in the contest, but we all know we're the only ones that know how well we've communicated our thoughts through our poetry. Isn't it interesting how wonderfully and adventurous the mind can be? I enjoyed following your train of thought throughout your poem. Thanks for sharing your poetry with us. A poet friend, Bill
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Lin Lane
Date: 1/21/2022 9:04:00 AM
Hi Bill. I hope you meant such lovely comments for me, and if they were for a poem Constance wrote she should be the one receiving your kind words. Your thoughts are always descriptive and valued.
Date: 1/20/2022 10:05:00 AM
You chose an interesting subject for your well written verse Lin. Best of luck in the contest. Tom
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Lin Lane
Date: 1/20/2022 10:29:00 AM
I suppose I did, but 'cracked' was more challenging, so win or lose, I decided to cut against the grain. lol Thanks, Tom.
Date: 1/20/2022 10:04:00 AM
Nicely done, aren't we all, just a little cracked?
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Lin Lane
Date: 1/20/2022 10:28:00 AM
At times... some of us more often than others. Thanks, DM.
Date: 1/20/2022 8:42:00 AM
Ah, surely a winner, Lin. This is so well-written I am sure it will find a high place in Constance's contest. I loved it, personally.
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Lin Lane
Date: 1/20/2022 8:53:00 AM
I never know what will do well, Milt. Most of the time I go the wrong way, but I wanted to choose one of the 'c' words that wasn't being used as much as others. Thanks for your support and encouragement.
Date: 1/20/2022 6:48:00 AM
Agreed, Lin, deep thoughts you have pondered upon here, nice write:)
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Lin Lane
Date: 1/20/2022 8:52:00 AM
Hi Jo, and thanks for commenting on this one.

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