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Covered With Fur

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so many frigid clouds so many dangling drooping dippers on this icy, icy night of paper, powder and pearl… she gushes out from the night blanket, cats and tigers in flight, trees mashing ivory feathers with silver stones. her lukewarm eyes sink with velvet birds sketching her photographs tissue crepe, ocean crème and maiden white, nesting on hemisphere’s balding coves the sky-lamps trip on her thermal feet naked… i mean, like breasts of newborn doves on the nest’s chilled waiting room... and just past midnight at the basement of stillness, nothingness, her translucent air swerves in transit between visions of secluded saints and sinners weeping then laughing at the bite of polar time. this moon lady of frost embraces lantern clouds waning, heralding her sacred infant-like incantation seemingly detached from earth mother’s limbs on this icy, icy night of paper, powder and pearl… she is cold changing to warm, breathless along an arctic season longing for her new moonchild to bear the fruits of plump colors soon to be.
........................................ (( here's to: Chris D. Aechtner's " Free Verse for Winter"))

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Date: 2/25/2011 11:37:00 AM
Congratulations Nette, on your well deserved win in Chris D. Aechtner's contest " Free Verse For Winter". Love, Carol
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Date: 2/19/2011 12:49:00 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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Date: 2/19/2011 10:32:00 AM
congrats on this excellent winning poem, it impressed me the first time I read it...
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Date: 2/19/2011 12:24:00 AM
A winner is covered with fur here. Congratulations on winning in Chris's contest with this fine entry.
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Date: 2/18/2011 8:02:00 PM
Such beauty ,such colours. many congrats for this win dear friend.
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Date: 2/18/2011 6:27:00 PM
Cool title, great win, and I just loved that last part about a cold changing to warm, to bear the fruits "of plump colors soon to be" Luscous! and congrats.
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Date: 2/18/2011 5:41:00 PM
Congratulations on the well deserved win in the contest of Chris, nette
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Date: 2/18/2011 2:14:00 PM
Coming back here to say Super Congrats, Nette! this was a really cool entry filled with imagery (haha you got me rhyming) hugs ;)
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Date: 2/18/2011 1:10:00 PM
Always enjoyable to read your work, Nett. Congratulations on your very fine win in the contest! Thank you for your always kind comments. Love, Annalise
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Date: 2/18/2011 12:12:00 PM
Great job Nette, congratulations on your worthy poem's sixth place honor. Agape, Moses
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Date: 2/18/2011 10:33:00 AM
deserved high placing for a deserving poet..........obviously the poetry soup people accepted the bribe I sent them on your behalf...well done Nette.....best wishes Syd....PS have sent you a soup mail
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Date: 2/18/2011 10:24:00 AM
So happy to see you in the winners' circle, Nette. Congratulations on your win in Chris's contest with this wonderful free verse. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 2/18/2011 8:53:00 AM
Cool congrats Nette my friend on your wonderful win in the Winter Free Verse contest with this excellent entry luv.. so happy to be sharing 6th place with one of the very best ... enjoy another precious win so well deserved for your creative talent luv..
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Date: 2/14/2011 5:48:00 AM
aawww u are so sweet and we are still so in luv after so many years of courtship and hanky panky and romance and now marriage.. thankxx sweets...
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Date: 2/14/2011 1:51:00 AM
happy valentine's day, Nette :) yet another glowing example of your talent with imagery-- this is a feast, so to speak -- you feed your readers well ;) really like that line about that "icy night of paper, powder and pearl" -- nice use of alliteration there and that last line sure gives a wonderful last impression :) you changed your title though? wish you the best in the contest! :) hugs :)
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Date: 2/13/2011 3:57:00 PM
This poem left me breathless in its beauty, you have a gift, best of luck in the contest~~
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Date: 2/13/2011 1:14:00 PM
A beatiful write like this will surely make the other seasons jealous. Well done
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Date: 2/13/2011 12:26:00 PM
Looks like a winter wonderland winner, Nette. Thanks also for your participation on my blog. Agape, Moses
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Date: 2/13/2011 11:52:00 AM
WoW.. u have totally outdone your creative capacity Nette my friend.. this is so fluid ..so flowing..so brilliantly presented.. luv the beginning with the double wording.. has a special essence to the piece.. Chris will surely luv this one... good luck with this amazing and astounding entry .. luv..
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Date: 2/13/2011 11:45:00 AM
W O W.................what else can I say Nette? ..........W O W .....................so many gems to steal and so little time ..............I am impressed even more than usual..........(glad you used all those good poetic phrases I supplied ) ...Syd
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Date: 2/13/2011 7:13:00 AM
Amazing imagery here nette!Another gem from you!---kashinath
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Date: 2/13/2011 5:47:00 AM
Another great entry for Chris's contest..best o luck to you ...always Michael
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Date: 2/13/2011 5:28:00 AM
Good luck in the contest with this very poetic verse..I was delighted that you stopped by, read and commented on my work..Sara
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Date: 2/13/2011 5:20:00 AM
You have some incredible images in this meaningful free verse Nette. Good luck in Chris's contest. Best to you, Diane
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Date: 2/13/2011 4:06:00 AM
Very well written free verse in the winter theme, Nette. You should do well in the contest with these beautifully flowing winter words. Smiles. I also wrote for the contest, but it ended up being a narrative poem...a little too much story in it. So, it's back to the drawing board for me! (Thank you for your kind words...often.)
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