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Courage

daybreak once again steam rising from the shadows fog threatens my will

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Susan Palli

Date: 2/23/2010 5:43:00 AM

Excellent!

Jared Pickett

Date: 11/24/2009 12:01:00 AM

Spooky..... Wow I have goosebumps..... Good write friend.....:JP]

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/21/2009 1:15:00 PM

Very nicely done, Jimbo! It does take courage to face each new day, doesn't it? Love, Carolyn

Gert W. Knop

Date: 11/20/2009 1:18:00 PM

It seems that we both like Senryus, Jimbo! Very poetic and powerful this one. I'll be offline for some weeks due to my moving and have to look for another provider. But I#ll be back when I can on soup. Thank you for your comment.....Gert

Donna Golden

Date: 11/14/2009 3:24:00 PM

I can relate to this one, Jimbo! Very nice senryu! Hugs, Donna

Brian Strand

Date: 11/13/2009 12:08:00 AM

Excellent Jim,fog can have that impact creating uncertainty,&l thank you for your welcome comments today.rgds Brian

P Sheart

Date: 11/11/2009 4:50:00 PM

Hi Jimbo, Wonderful visual here! Don't let that fog threaten your will! smile. Truly enjoyed. Thanks for sharing and for your most welcome comments. Later Love Light Patty

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 11/9/2009 5:05:00 PM

dark and light, yin & yang..a well balanced write! Light & Love

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 11/9/2009 12:41:00 PM

I hate to watch the fog threatining your will..you ll pass the fog,,im sure,,i am--Charma

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 11/9/2009 12:40:00 PM

I hate to watch the fog threatining your will..you ll pass the fog,,im sure,,i am--Charma

Marty Owens

Date: 11/8/2009 7:28:00 PM

Nice....enjoyed...Marty

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 11/8/2009 3:13:00 PM

Love it..Describes perfectly the way some days start. BG

Elaine George

Date: 11/8/2009 1:15:00 PM

FANTASTIC SENRYU, JAMES. LOVE, LAINIE PS. THANK YOU FOR ALL YOUR KIND COMMENTS.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/8/2009 11:11:00 AM

Interesting thoughts about fog. Have you ever been lost in it or have it drape its blanket around you or fog cover your brain? Keep writing. Sara

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 11/8/2009 10:40:00 AM

Striking image. It's true facing each new day takes courage. Thank you for sharing. I needed that. Be well, Caroline.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/8/2009 7:32:00 AM

Jim this is kinda stirring ... every day is a new day to meet the challenges ahead.. being positive is the key in the face of adversity... luv this very much ... u are most creative in your words... good day to u, Jim... Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"