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With savage care she held the word 'goodbye' Against his throat, just nigh of drawing blood And should his tongue attempt to flick a sigh His coursing and her ire would bring the flood She held his heart, like many, o'er the flames Her fleshy pyres so burned for temp'ring souls And though the fiery embers laid their claims He would not let his heart be turned to coals 'So do the worst' he said 'your deadly quips' 'But love has two keen blades, like any knife!' Still, while his own farewell danced on his lips His tongue would not quite speak it into life So there he lay, a curse of passion's need Awaiting one last kiss ... to make him bleed. ~ 1st Place ~ in the "Strand Completely New 26, Any Form, Any Theme" Poetry Contest, Brian Strand, Judge & Sponsor.

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Date: 8/31/2020 3:29:00 PM
Always my friend, you verse flies a cut above. Into the highest heavens and even beyond. This to me is a truly spectacular piece. Closing two verses are as fine as I have ever seen! A majestic gem and a fine fav too...
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Date: 8/25/2020 10:07:00 PM
Nice to share a #1 spot with you, though I must admit yours 'cuts' a lot deeper than mine. Everything you provide to the reader: title, image, rhythm, vocab, rhyme, formatting, passion, dread, blood, poetic ambiguity, all of it. You just give so much, and craft so carefully. All is appreciated, admired, and enjoyed. Congrats on your top win, my friend.
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Date: 8/24/2020 3:09:00 AM
It's a wow write...holding a goodbye against his throat like the blade of a knife.....just super....Congrats on your win.
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Date: 8/21/2020 8:15:00 AM
Yeah this is really good, held the word goodbye against his throat, great personification and imagery G
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Date: 8/21/2020 6:41:00 AM
And he will get his wish...Enjoyed the read...Well done
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